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for The Right Way

by nayru

schedule February 16, 2009 at 12:00 AM
I was here when you were making this story.. and now Im back AGAIN. Lol if I posted everytime I reread there'd be like 20 posts lol.
This is a story that never truly gets old.
I DUB this story A Naruto Classic.
person China Dolly
schedule November 24, 2008 at 12:00 AM
That was very good. I really enjoyed reading it. It was sweet, romantic and funny.
But I do have a question. Your penname includes the word: kleinefee.
I'm Dutch, and "kleine fee" means little fairy in Dutch. So I was just wondering if you live in the Netherlands too.

Anyway, I'll be sure to read your other fanfictions too!
person Vague
schedule March 1, 2008 at 12:00 AM
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Emi Baptiste
Admin of Itsuwari.com and Laefe Epublishing.
person Ivy
schedule August 29, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I love you.
person Anon
schedule July 13, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Wow.... simply; WOW!
I came along this story yesterday and I was hooked the minute I started reading!
This has to be the best yaoi story I have ever read! And it was even my favourite pairing ;D
Your writing skills are really and I mean REALLY admirable^^
I loved the fact that you put Kakashi's thoughts on display all the time ;D It really was a nice twist to the story.
And they took their time getting to know each other and being ready. That is so sweet and that is so my cup of tea^^
And I absolutely LOVED the chapter where Gai stormed in and started with his Eternal RIval stuff XD
And he was SO confused when he found Iruka in Kakashi's bed XD I was laughing so hard at that moment^^
To sum this up, I LOVED your story :D
*bows and praises* ^__^
person Vesca
schedule June 30, 2007 at 12:00 AM
*loves* Just finished reading it through again XD It's really such a lovely cute story :D I love the manipulative Pakkun and the irukamanic!Kakashi XD
schedule April 22, 2007 at 12:00 AM
This story is so adorable... I especially love Kakashi's internal dialogue. It's hilarious and sweet at the same time. ^__^ Keep up the good work!
person Onawa
schedule April 17, 2007 at 12:00 AM
This story was SO MUCH FUN TO READ!!!!! I am going to keep my eyes out for more of your stories.
person luna2k
schedule April 10, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I loved this fanfic :)
hope you keep writing more kakairu please!
person Anon
schedule April 3, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Firstly, I need to stop laughing.

-ahem- ::wipes aways happy laughter tears::

My gods, that was one of the best KakaIruKaka fanfic's where it's a normal setting I've ever read! It's the only one I know that's so wonderful, grammatically and plot-wise, as well as it actually follows the story line!! Your portrayal of their interactions and emotions was fantastic, and I commend you for being able to work Pakkun in there--he's so funny, especially when you add him, Kakashi, kitchen, and a recipe! That was hilarious!

The epilogue was cute, and it really did tie the loose ends up, I actually wasn't expecting the whole Hokage-thing, but I had a feeling 'Ruka was going to tell someone. Still, I love the way you put it together!


BEFORE I FORGET!! The best part of this WHOLE thing was the way you wrote Kakashi's thoughts and were able to tie them in beautifully....can you read his mind?? 'Cause if you could, that's exactly how I'd imagine he thinks, he train of thought must be that exactly. And, you know what?? I'm glad that I sat down and read this entire thing!

Thank you for sharing it with everyone, beautifully written, keep up the amazing work.

Oh, and if you want to contact me, then go to FFnet and search "CopyNinAstral".

Much luffles,

.Astral.