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for The Right Way

by nayru

person ALD
schedule April 1, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Man, I can't believe it's over. I liked the last chapter, very cute and light, just like the first chapter. Hopefully some of your future projects include this couple. Although I'm not sure about a sequel to this story line. It seemed to end at a point that was very good. Anyway, great job overall, like I've stated before. Now, I can go back and re-read it all over again.
person SasuNaru7
schedule March 31, 2007 at 12:00 AM
NO! it can't be over!!! *tear* will there be a seqeul? i hope so. i REALLY REALLY want one... so badly! *runs away crying*
person Mitsu
schedule March 30, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Aww! *w* Sutekiiii! And kawaii! I loved the whole story! It's freaking good! Arigatou for everything... ^w^
person emp78
schedule March 29, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I loved the wonderful perviness how everyone seemed to want either Iruka, Kakashi, or both. Iruka getting angry about people wanting 'his Kakashi' was great! Laxitive-coated senbons, EWWWW, that's evil.LOL. Great story. Keep up the good work.^_^
schedule March 29, 2007 at 12:00 AM
that was a wonderful story i enjoyed reading it. but i was hopping that there was more.
person Hello
schedule March 29, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Aww, I like the ending. To possessive people. :p
schedule March 29, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Awwwww it's over already?!?!

*Sigh*another good fic...finished... *sighs again*...*grins* it was great though :d you made me look forward to every update and it's one of my favourite kakiru fics ^_^ so well done to you ^_6 and hope you write more fics soon

Hina xXxx
schedule March 29, 2007 at 12:00 AM
that was so cute. i was hoping iruka would do something like that. thanks for writing such an utterly adorable story! i look forward to your next project!
person devil child
schedule March 29, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I can't believe it's over *cries*. It was a great story I had a lot of fun reading it.
person Casso
schedule March 29, 2007 at 12:00 AM
*Sob* It's over! I can't even express over reviewing how much fangirl squee-ness this fic caused me... I loves you! XD Irukashi fo-EVA. *Screams*