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March 15, 2007 at 12:00 AM
OK, now I have to check how often you update. Great story - lots of fun to read - the lemons are hot. looking forward to the rest of the story!!!
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March 13, 2007 at 12:00 AM
lol - I love how you blend the events of the series around Kakashi and Iruka's developing relationship. I just can't wait to see what happens to them next. You write them so well.
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March 13, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Oh man, only three more chapters?! :( I love this story, I really hope you'll consider writing another one. I liked this chapter, glad to see some hospital bed cuddling. I haven't gotten this far in the timeline yet, so not sure what parts are actually from Naruto, but I couldn't care less b/c I really like the way you write, it's so smooth. Someone else reviewed that you weave aspects of the series into your story really well and I have to agree w/them. Good job overall and can't wait to see the next chapters.
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March 9, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I love the new chapter, although I don't like that Kakashi might do his job badly. But I love how the nurse thought he was under a jutsu! And he finally said it!!
So adorable!! Awesome chapter!!
So adorable!! Awesome chapter!!
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March 8, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Although I have not reviewed this story before, but I have to tell you that it is one of my favorites and everytime you update my heart soars. I too have reread it several times and fall in love with Iruka and Kakashi over and over again with every word. Please keep up this wonderful story and know that you have an avid fan in me! (and many others I am sure!)
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March 8, 2007 at 12:00 AM
“Kakashi and Iruka”, Iruka murmured, “Iruka and Kakashi. And Iruka. And Kakashi.”
That bit just made me go awwww Iruka's so friggin lovable!!! And poor Kakashi he was worried sick! And I loved how Iruka was asking if they could do 'it' again loool, when he got better. :d Little Iruka is coming out of his shell, ne?
It was a great chp. ^_^ I'll be on the look out for the next one like always
Hina xXxx
That bit just made me go awwww Iruka's so friggin lovable!!! And poor Kakashi he was worried sick! And I loved how Iruka was asking if they could do 'it' again loool, when he got better. :d Little Iruka is coming out of his shell, ne?
It was a great chp. ^_^ I'll be on the look out for the next one like always
Hina xXxx
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March 8, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Great chapter, really cute. I love how adorable they are w/each other, and soooo glad nothing serious happened to Iruka. I would've loved if Kakashi decided to stay and hold Iruka in the hospital bed, but he's gotta go do the nin thing first. Anyway, hope to see more soon.
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March 8, 2007 at 12:00 AM
First off, I just wanted to let you know that you're a terrible person - how DARE you write a story that I have to keep on rereading and how DARE you write a story that makes me laugh. And I just wanted to let you know that I was upset when the last chapter ended. I hope you feel properly ashamed. So THERE!
~The Flame Reviews~
~The Flame Reviews~
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March 6, 2007 at 12:00 AM
ROFLMAO! That kitchen scene was just too funny! Course, the blowjobs weren't bad either.
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March 5, 2007 at 12:00 AM
AWWW poor Kakashi - all that effort and he forgot the baking powder? LOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOL - oh it's okay it's okay, it's the thought that counts and Iruka definitely rewarded him for that heh :D Nice ^_6 keem 'em coming!!!
^_^Hina
^_^Hina