rate_review Reviews

This series is so sweet and so hot! I loved this last chapter! I have a bad feeling though that the next chapter won't be so happy, considering what happens during the Chunnin exams.

To be totally melodramatic, I've had a bunch of craptacular days recently and have been looking for updates to my fave stories here. Your's didn't disappoint, it was so funny and hot. I really like the way you portray the lemons, they're really good but not over done, I enjoy a good pwp when that's exactly what it is, but for the pace of your story I think they're done just right. Keep up the good work, can't wait to see what happens to our couple with the events that are about to crop up.

Oh yeah! an update! Oh, I can actually say something useful for a change--I'll found one should be I'll find one. I think I'm in a proofreading groove--I just found a million in two of my stories, some real horrors. Oh, well, back to the review--I love Pakkun!!! There isn't enough Pakkun stories! OMG--I have to go write a challenge for a Pakkun/Akamaru, but that's an aside. I loved the egg seperation!!! And the baking powder!! And the comment about Sasuke needing to sleep in his own bed! This one was so cute! Is this the last one? I hope there is at least one more chapter!!! Please???
Thanks!

Oh--I'm so glad you didn't seperate the couple--I wasn't suggesting that, I was just going into doom and gloom--you said something bad would happen, and I immediately assumed a break-up and heartache. I like how you work in the "canon"! I loved the internal dialogue in this chapter. The info on Kakashi thinking he wasn't ready to be a chuunin was interesting--did you mean jounin, since his eye was his jounin gift and the whole disaster that lost him his best friend was his first jouin mission? But of course he could also have not been ready for chuunin either! Oh, no, now I'm panicking that I have misremembered the whole Kakashi Gaiden thing--was it chuunin? Oh, well, that's what wikipedia is for, but I'm off topic now . . .

I'm glad Pakkun will resurface--I have a feeling he can get spill the beans on how truly crazy Kakashi is for Iruka. Gosh, I sort of forget the details and would have to reread the early chapters, but wasn't there some lie about Pakkun and cooking to get Iruka to come over or stay over--is that going to damn poor Kakashi--or reveal how desperate and inept he is at dating?

I'm really enjoying this; Thanks for the new chapter!

Glad that they didn't fight for too long. Are we going to see anymore angst in the future though? Good chapter, can't wait for Pakkun.

Dammit--why'd you go and say the next chapter was going to be a downer? I was feeling happy and full of hope for the lovely couple.
Oh well--love the internal dialogue with Kaka. If you are going to split our couple for a while, maybe you can have Pakkun come talk to Iruka?
I never get tired of Kaka and Iruka . . .
Thanks for the new chaper!

Finally some answers as to why Iruka's so hesitant. I wonder, even though the audience knows, if Kakashi figured out who it was who hurt Iruka. Hopefully, whatever you have planned next chapter doesn't do too much damage to our lovely couple. Nice chapter, update soon.

it was Mizuki!! but what is kakashi going to do? let's see, the chuunin exams are coming up... is it that he's going to abandon naruto in order to train sasuke? oh well, i'll just look forward to the next chapter!!

Awww, adorable! I was wondering who messed Iruka up at first, now I know! This story is so freakin' cute it makes me wanna squeal!

VERY funny! Gai is amazing hilarious!!!!!

Exam time - poor Iruka. I'm looking forward to seeing how you deal with it!