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You're right it was much 'yummier' as you put it, now let me tell you how I put it 'HELL YEAH! IRUKA AND KAKASHI IN THE SHOWER' heh - can we say nosebleed? Two fine specimen doing things to eachother whilst wet... okay okay *pulls out a tissue for nose* let me stop there before I suffer from severe blood loss, ne? Now on a more SANE note lol, I liked it, just like I liked the previous chp ^_^ it was very good and I hope you update soon ^_6

Hina xXxx

While the chapter was good and very enjoyable, I couldn't help but feel that it was just a teeny bit too sweet. Mainly an overdose in the "my Iruka"'s. I like them, but there were just too many. The sex was quite nummy though and the shower scene very well done. You're also very good at incorporating the idea of smell into your story. Most writers ignore that. Kudos for you! :)
My favorite line was "Iruka-pillow. Best pillow ever."
I hope this review helps you in your writing. You've got a good thing going and I can't wait to read more. Please keep up with the constant updates.
~The Flame Reviews~

Heee!

This story is so much fun to read. Cute, sweet, fun, yummy!

I love this part:
“I’m… I’m manly.”
Kakashi grinned. “Somebody very cute told me showering helps against that.”

And I would definitely eat chocolate fish with onions, if Iruka cooked it for me. Yum!

i think it was perfect. this was just so sweet. i mean, iruka's shyness and kakashi's halting confession... *sigh* i really enjoy the pace of this piece, and just all the fluff you manage to get in there. great job. i look forward to the next chapter!!

Everything worked--excellent, worth waiting for, even better after all the build up!

What I wanna know is, where I can get an Iruka-pillow? Great chapter, the pace of the lemon was good, not to much-just enought to keep it HOT. If the extra time means we get delicious chapters like this one, then by all means take your time. The hesitancy on Iruka's part intrigues me. Hopefully we get to learn what happened in his past to make him so insecure, or am I reading too much into it and he's just really shy? Either way, can't wait for the next update.

Bad Bad Genma! I hope at one point Iruka puts him in his place which would make Kakashi feel so loved.
How sweet of Kakashi to give up his date--I love the constant use of the counting down to the date!
Bakashi--hysterical!!

Please, more soon! This is so funny, sexy, cute, WAFFy!

Great! One of my favorite chapters by far. There was so much I liked about it,like Kakashi's inner dialogue after someone said something. I loved Genma,he's one of my faves and I wish he would show up in more ficcage. I love when others are interested in Iruka,since he's so loveable,but he chooses Kakashi anyway. Naruto gets on my nerves though,can't wait to see how Iruka makes it up to Kakashi. Update soon! :)

That had me laughing so much - lol, poor Iruka - what a situation and Kakashi - I love the 'Bakashi' sensei thing and genma was great hehehe :d. Nice ;) Update when you can, ne?

Hina xXxx

this was so incredilby cute! it's about time kakashi realized he has to share. and genma is such a perv. ^.^ i look foward to the next update!