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for The Right Way

by nayru

person ALD
schedule February 2, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Another good chapter. I really like the story,and this chapter was cute,but I thought it was lacking something from the previous chapters,not sure what though. But hey,you don't see me posting anything so carry on,and my favorite part was Pakkun and the strawberries. Great way to end my evening,can't wait for the chapter w/just Kakashi and Iruka,hope Kakashi can pull through. ;)
person Hestia
schedule February 2, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Thank you for this adorable story! I was feeling down, and you really cheered me up. I love your Kakashi and Pakkun. I'm looking forward to Kakashi and Iruka alone to. I loved the grocery shopping and the cooking scene. Pakkun's advice was so funny!! Thanks again!!
schedule February 2, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Oh I think that was great lol, it's somehow different from usual KakaIru fics, anyway I think it's brilliant. Can't wait for the next update.

Hina xXxx
person ALD
schedule January 28, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Thanks for the speedy update. What a great way to start my Sunday and I'm about to go grocery shopping myself. I totally understand where Kakashi is coming from w/the cooking. When I cook I frequently think all the ingredients are working against me. I loved the part about "eggplant hell"! Keep up the good work and I can't wait to see what happens w/those strawberrys. ;)
person ShayBoo
schedule January 28, 2007 at 12:00 AM
LOVELY!

*eagerly awaits the next chapter*
schedule January 28, 2007 at 12:00 AM
this is so very cute!! i love how kakashi's so nervous about everything, and the way he keeps referring to himself as 'Hatake,' like he's on a football team or something. i can't wait for the next chapter!! update soon!
person hanyou-elf
schedule January 28, 2007 at 12:00 AM
very nice. i love the way you write kakashi-sensei. he's so awesome. you don't know how much fun this story is. i love the way you write pakkun, you're so right, there aren't enough stories featuring pakkun. the characters are so awesome, i could just see everything unfolding as though it were an episode or something. so, great job my dear and please, keep it up. i can't wait to read the next chapter!
~hanyou-elf
schedule January 25, 2007 at 12:00 AM
i just love your story so far!! o^.^O keep up the great work!
person ALD
schedule January 25, 2007 at 12:00 AM
It's official, this has got to be my favorite Kakashi/Iruka story. I can't get enough, pls update soon!!!
person ALD
schedule January 21, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Another great chapter! Kakashi's little daydreams are classic and I loved how Iruka stood up for him. Update soon!