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November 13, 2008 at 12:00 AM
OMG!!!!! Yuki is still ALIVE????!!!! This is GREAT!!!! Now Naruto and Sasuke will be alright and Sasuke and the Counselors will see how evil Yuki really is!!! I'm so glad you updated this story I've been waiting for this for a very long time. Thanks to that fan that asked you to continue this.XD
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August 21, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Grate chapter!!!! I'm so happy that you are back and writing again. I can’t wait to read the next chapter so please keep on writing and UPDATE SOON.
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August 13, 2008 at 12:00 AM
this is such a great story please do finish I always see great stories never finished please don't let this be one
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July 2, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Chapter 11: Heh. He doesn’t remember the guy’s name.
Heh. Sasuke’s embarrassed. . . . “Don’t think that. I deserve to be here. The stuff I put you through.” Oh, brother.
Err . . . that ending . . . was totally . . . random. I mean, what happened? .__.
Heh. Sasuke’s embarrassed. . . . “Don’t think that. I deserve to be here. The stuff I put you through.” Oh, brother.
Err . . . that ending . . . was totally . . . random. I mean, what happened? .__.
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June 27, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Chapter 6: “Girl or guy, he’d take either one.” I wonder if Sasuke plans to stay a girl if it means winning Naruto. Or if he’s just planning to ease Naruto into the male-Sasuke version. . . . So Kanami bites her lips a lot. I wonder if Sasuke ever did that, or if he somehow gained the habit with the form. . . . Dancing on water. Cute.
Do I know what’s going to happen next? Well, the obvious answer would be kissy time! . . . But maybe the answer won’t be obvious. In which case, I have no idea.
Do I know what’s going to happen next? Well, the obvious answer would be kissy time! . . . But maybe the answer won’t be obvious. In which case, I have no idea.
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June 27, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Chapter 7: (*giggles at the chapter title*)
Huh? Where’d he go? . . . . Oh.
“After hearing her name Kiba whispered it through his head, rolling his eyes [. . .]” What? What’s wrong with the name? õ_ô
Ohhh, I see what’s going on. Hehehe. Doggy-boy’s drooling over her. . . . Does Kiba have some dog instincts or something? He can’t see that the girl’s with Naruto? . . . . Heh, and people call Naruto slow. Kiba took the cake. ^^ . . . . She fell asleep as a girl? How long has she been in that form, I wonder?
Oy, don’t use the fic as a bribe. Nurse the poor baby, encourage it to grow, otherwise it could come out half-assed, and that won’t be fun.
Huh? Where’d he go? . . . . Oh.
“After hearing her name Kiba whispered it through his head, rolling his eyes [. . .]” What? What’s wrong with the name? õ_ô
Ohhh, I see what’s going on. Hehehe. Doggy-boy’s drooling over her. . . . Does Kiba have some dog instincts or something? He can’t see that the girl’s with Naruto? . . . . Heh, and people call Naruto slow. Kiba took the cake. ^^ . . . . She fell asleep as a girl? How long has she been in that form, I wonder?
Oy, don’t use the fic as a bribe. Nurse the poor baby, encourage it to grow, otherwise it could come out half-assed, and that won’t be fun.
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June 27, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Chapter 8: Oh good, he’s a guy again. (*whew*) So why’d he wake up so fast? Bad dream or gooood dream? . . . . “a fever some say, but an Uchiha having one was unheard of.” (*snort*) Yeah, right.
(*giggle*) “Hi.” XD Naruto’s response to Kanami was funny. . . . So has Naruto been around too? Not a virgin, I mean. He just met Kanami that day, and already it’s “Wanna have sex?” Yeesh. . . . (*shifts uncomfortably*) Dude, I was hoping for some yaoi in this story. (*blush*) . . . . (*blinks*) Oh, it was a dream. Daaaaang, that was vivid. (*dazed*) . . . . Ooooooh – ! X3 That was a good cliffhanger.
No idea, I can’t imagine.
(*giggle*) “Hi.” XD Naruto’s response to Kanami was funny. . . . So has Naruto been around too? Not a virgin, I mean. He just met Kanami that day, and already it’s “Wanna have sex?” Yeesh. . . . (*shifts uncomfortably*) Dude, I was hoping for some yaoi in this story. (*blush*) . . . . (*blinks*) Oh, it was a dream. Daaaaang, that was vivid. (*dazed*) . . . . Ooooooh – ! X3 That was a good cliffhanger.
No idea, I can’t imagine.
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June 27, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Chapter 9: I’ll have to look at those pictures soon.
Oh, it’s Yuki who’s his partner! Should’ve guessed! ^_^ . . . . (*snicker*) Naruto’s proud that he’s taller than Yuki. Cute.
“This Yuki was awful [. . .]” Why? What did Yuki do?
Ahhhh, jealous. Cool.
Oh no, don’t tell me Yuki’s playing Wronged Lover. . . . Yikes. That’s gotta be awkward. I wonder if Sasuke’s going to learn about Naruto killing one of the guys he screwed. . . . Bad move, Naruto, leaving the body like that. You gotta get rid of the body, so enemies don’t learn secrets from it.
Alias, eh?
Crap. I was hoping that it had been a dream.
Oh, it’s Yuki who’s his partner! Should’ve guessed! ^_^ . . . . (*snicker*) Naruto’s proud that he’s taller than Yuki. Cute.
“This Yuki was awful [. . .]” Why? What did Yuki do?
Ahhhh, jealous. Cool.
Oh no, don’t tell me Yuki’s playing Wronged Lover. . . . Yikes. That’s gotta be awkward. I wonder if Sasuke’s going to learn about Naruto killing one of the guys he screwed. . . . Bad move, Naruto, leaving the body like that. You gotta get rid of the body, so enemies don’t learn secrets from it.
Alias, eh?
Crap. I was hoping that it had been a dream.
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June 27, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Chapter 10: Pssh. Well, THAT figures that Yuki’s dad would be a council member. (*snort*)
A week? What the hell caused that to happen?! õ_ô
I told you he should’ve taken care of the body. u_u
A week? What the hell caused that to happen?! õ_ô
I told you he should’ve taken care of the body. u_u
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June 26, 2008 at 12:00 AM
(I review as I read.)
Chapter 1: Cool set-up. I can kind of see that image.
I wonder who he’s doing. . . . Blond, huh? Hmm. . . . I wonder why the teen is so concerned. . . . “You should see the last guy who asked to be seme!” ô_ô What happened?
Cool.
I liked that chapter! It was short, but it said so much. It set the stage. I liked. =D
Chapter 1: Cool set-up. I can kind of see that image.
I wonder who he’s doing. . . . Blond, huh? Hmm. . . . I wonder why the teen is so concerned. . . . “You should see the last guy who asked to be seme!” ô_ô What happened?
Cool.
I liked that chapter! It was short, but it said so much. It set the stage. I liked. =D