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for Secrets and lies

by brook13baby13

schedule April 24, 2007 at 12:00 AM
They kiss. During the kiss Naruto dispells the illusion, but keeps right on kissing letting Sasuke know that he know, and doesn't care!!!!
person oreo
schedule April 20, 2007 at 12:00 AM
They are going to dance on top of the water.

I can't believe naruto knows its sasuke. It would have been nice if he didn't. I would have liked to read about his surprise. That would be a nice shock to their relationship. Now it seems like naruto is the one that's not being truthful.
person Dragon7
schedule April 20, 2007 at 12:00 AM
My guess would be that their going to kiss? I can't wait to read the next chapter so update soon.
person mary
schedule April 17, 2007 at 12:00 AM
this story needs at least one lemon! please i want to see where this going.
person Dragon7
schedule April 12, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Great chapter!!!! I can’t wait to read the next chapter so please keep on writing and UPDATE SOON.
person PandaLover
schedule April 12, 2007 at 12:00 AM
aahhhh!!! *pulling out hairs* i've been waiting for this story to get to the good part.
schedule April 10, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I'm Gald u got a beta :)...cant wait for more
person Dragon7
schedule March 22, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Great chapter!!!!!!!!!! I can't wait to read the next chapter so update soon with a longer chapter.
schedule March 21, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I LOVE THIs STORY PLZ UPDAT SOON^____^
schedule March 18, 2007 at 12:00 AM
very good story, the only thing I would check is spelling, but very good.