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for In Death

by Hiiroshoken

person Ai_Kyou_Gokai
schedule January 12, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I just have to say this again. GOD!!! YOU ARE GOD! I cant even believe nobody else has reviewed this story!! WTF PEOPLE ARE YOU RETARDED? DEE-DEE-DEE. Lol. ^_^
person darktoy
schedule January 12, 2007 at 12:00 AM
You say you have problems at writing in POV. But let me say, that I'm very happy with this fic. The emotions you reflected in Sasuke, made me love him more... adn yet I pity him. Because his victim of his own choice.
It's sad and yet has a real taste in there. A Bittersweet.
Sasuke, in the end, found what he wanted. what he loved the most. And Naruto, by just being himself, he gave a sense of redemption to the Uchiha.
I highly recommend a sequel. For If you don't do it, I might slash the reality velvet to kick your ass until you do it. (That means I loved the fic).
Normally, I prefer Sasuke being the seme. But at this instance, wer Sasuke was more dead than alive... He needed this alliance.
please, Update soon!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
person kaa-san
schedule January 12, 2007 at 12:00 AM
so sad yet so sweet. love it.
person Mikra
schedule January 12, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Oh, I absolutely loved this.
person Anon
schedule January 12, 2007 at 12:00 AM
wow i didn't expect naruto to kill sasuke O.O