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May 22, 2007 at 12:00 AM
This is cute. I think it's funny though that you keep writing about chicken ramen. I don't know anyone who likes it XD Pork is generally the standard, unless you're eating something instant. The town next to mine is famous for chicken ramen, but everyone says it tastes bad. ><
Generally Japanese people don't eat chicken soup when they're sick. They eat a type of rice porridge called "kayu".
Generally Japanese people don't eat chicken soup when they're sick. They eat a type of rice porridge called "kayu".
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May 1, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I loved this. All bubblegum and ice-cream made even sweeter by the bitterness of sadness.
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May 1, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I thought chapter 4 was the last, glad I was wrong. This chapter was very warm and fluffy; I loved the dream sequence. Hope more chapters "come to you".
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April 27, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Such a sweet chapter, and a happy ending. I'd like to see the first chapter of your new story. Will it be AU w/this pairing, or will deal w/another couple? Overall, very nice story. Post another when you get a chance.
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March 6, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Very good three chapters, very enjoyable, and a nice followup to the mission fic. I have only one complaint. Your use of the word "thing". A THING of rice. A THING of ramen (I think...). It makes it seem like you were in a rush to put out the chapter and couldn't be bothered with remembering the proper word. It breaks the flow of the story. BUT, that is my one and ONLY issue - your story is quite wonderful!!!
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March 5, 2007 at 12:00 AM
These stories are so sweet. I love them.
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March 5, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Cute chapter, now I'm hungry for ramen. Can't wait for the more "intense" scenes.
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February 27, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I LOVE this! Your story, Escort Duty, was such a well crafted tale, and this one is adorable so far! Please continue!!
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February 7, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Such a sweet set of stories! Relatively light, well written and nice to read. Looking forward to future snippets.
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January 24, 2007 at 12:00 AM
The idea of Kakashi flailing on the ice is extremely funny especially since you would think he would be more graceful than a ten year old. I've really enjoyed the stories so far so I'm glad you're going to continue with them! Sorry to hear about the ditch that must have been extremely nerve-racking hope your okay.