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January 13, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Awww...that was so cute and sweet...i loved it.
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January 13, 2007 at 12:00 AM
LOVE, MUCH LOVE!
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January 13, 2007 at 12:00 AM
*shiver* Gawsh that was good... *rubs arms* I feel all shaky for some reason.
I thought it was so heartwrenching when a tear ran down Sasuke's face - It's so painful to think that Mr Stoic-show-no-emotions-Uchiha would cry *sQuee!*. I thought Naruto's dialogue was really sweet. But I so, so SO love the confusion in the both of them. It's so cute *faints*
Anyway! Awesome job! I utterly loved it *heart heart*
Write more XD!
I thought it was so heartwrenching when a tear ran down Sasuke's face - It's so painful to think that Mr Stoic-show-no-emotions-Uchiha would cry *sQuee!*. I thought Naruto's dialogue was really sweet. But I so, so SO love the confusion in the both of them. It's so cute *faints*
Anyway! Awesome job! I utterly loved it *heart heart*
Write more XD!
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January 13, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Hmmm... very well written and the ending was great and sweet. The only complaint I have is that the begining is pretty much exactly like a doujinshi that I have come across many times. I am not going to make any accusations since it could be a very weird coincidence.
Besides that I loved it.
Besides that I loved it.
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January 13, 2007 at 12:00 AM
AH. Please disreguard my previous review. I did not read your Authors note. Guess I should read those firsts from now on. I really am sorry. Feel free to delete that review. I feel really bad now.
On a better note I really did like seeing it ended like that since the doujin just leaves it off with Sakura yelling at Naruto. It made me feel all warm and fuzzy in side and Kakashi just made me laugh. Very very good.
And again I am sorry. XD
On a better note I really did like seeing it ended like that since the doujin just leaves it off with Sakura yelling at Naruto. It made me feel all warm and fuzzy in side and Kakashi just made me laugh. Very very good.
And again I am sorry. XD