rate_review Reviews

Ohhh sniffles! Damn b*st*rd... We oughta sock him a couple of times and tie him down for Naruto to... er... *cough* Anyway! Awesome chapter. Well written, as usual, with no errors I could see, as usual ^^. Dammmmmn it I thought he would staaaaay *moans and whinges*. I can't wait to see what happens now.

Your author's note at the end was adorable, by the way. "I put this up eaaaarly caaause~ I ARE DONE CHAPTY FOUR" OH YOU CUTE AUTHOR YOU! I feel all bubbly now, despite the angsty chapter. Thanks, with much love!

Update soon!

PS. The smut was fine o_O. I didn't really feel a rush, but if you did, then okay!

OH please,please update soon i can't wait this is so cool,nice fic,^_^

i really like your story. i don't believe that sasuke would instantly come back either he's to pigheaded (beat it into his head with a sledgehammer is more his style). i don't like sakura but only because after naruto saved her from gaara she thanked sasuke and never said anything to naruto. the same when he saved her from drowning. i do believe that we in the yaio section are hard on her but she deserves it.

Damn Sasuke teme, sometimes I jus think he doesn't deserve Naruto... you know what? He DOESN'T deserve him! And Naruto can do so much better... too damn bad that these two fis *sigh*...

Bring ont he next one. It was good ^_^

Hina xXxx

You know what...I liked it. Sasuke is a bastard and great sex shouldn't change that after one go! So yeah...cookies for you! I can't wait for the next chapter! Great Job!

THIS IS SO GOOD. OMG. NEXT CHAPTER!!!!!

and i really do hope that, despite it all, things will end on a good note between Naruto and Sasuke. Their just too...CUTE TOGETHER!

Hello there :-)

The story seems interesting and well written. I'd like to see where this is going to so keep writing. And I think it's okay to put up a chapter when it's ready but that's up to you.

Nothing witty to say so I will stop. Oh... It's time for some NaruSasu action, ne ;-)
Nathaniel

Woa.

Holy crud... how HAWT was THAT?! *shivers* And they didn't even need lube... gods... Well, I loved it. Absolutely loved it. I still think the confession in chapter one was heart wrenching and I definitely still adore it *love love*, but the smut definitely compares. You did an awesome job. It was so steamy X3. I kinda wish there was a bit more moaning and a little less hissing, but it was still... "effective" *giggles like mad*. Naruto's easy going personality made the scene so comfortable. Oh! And the curse-seal kissing was dreamy... *daze daze*.

Anyway, it'd be great to read the next chapter in two days, but I'd rather have the waits spread out evenly, so once a week is cool ^^. I'll try and wait for your update! Good luck with the rest of the writing!

I'll get straight into it.

The confession was beautiful. Downright beautiful. Poetic even. Sasuke's awkwardness and quiet demeanor was heart stopping. The words he said... "I've... Liked you. Since before..." it made my eyes widen and my heart drop right to my gut. And I could see it all! I could hear the rain, I could picture Sasuke looking away and it was just... *cries* Oh I sound so corny.

It was beautiful. It really was *tears*.

*cough* I'll try to stop sounding so emotional ^^''... It was written divinely! It was like I was there ^^. And the pauses; awkwardness and quietness of the scene was so fitting! ^^ I love all of Naruto's quotes that are in italics. It just seemed to make them so much stronger XP (I sometimes really feel a little icked when authors use caps instead of italics, it can ruin the moments at times).

Argh! That evil snake has once again wormed his way into interferring with glorious SasuNaru. Orochimaru needs to have Kabuto shoved up in places where whole human beings should not be allowed to fit XP.
Update soon!

PS. Nice to know there'll be sex next chapter. Does that mean Sasuke doesn't leave XP? *giggles* That'd be so good~~ *daze daze*

simply tear jerking. I love it and it makes me feel so sick but happy inside. Please continue ;-;