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I think it should be NaruSasu because there are too many SasuNaru stories out their and not enough of stories were sasuke is the uke. By the way grate chapter I can't what to read the next chapter so please update soon!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!.

I like your story. You write it well, and it's got an interesting twist that I've never seen before. I hope you keep up the good work and add a chapter soon. So do it!

Make it a NaruSasu,please?

mmm this is adorable, but poor ... um ... well, just about everybody :p i will wait with baited breath for updates!

This is... diffrent but I like it nonetheless

I LOVE it!! Poor insane Arashi...

Yay KakaIruka!!!

Well thinking logically... I'd have to say NaruSasu. Naruto should be seme... At least for the first time.

Wow, where to start? Okay the fight - that hurt my heart, and I have to ask after Sasuke hit Naruto the first time, when Naruto hit him back you started to refer to him as the slave again. Did you do that on purpose cause it made the fight so much more painful, it was like you took away his humanity, excellent literary usage if you did it on purpose if you didn't, amazing intuition on your part. Okay next loving the development of the relationship between those two, it's such a great set up having Naruto show Sasuke "how to be in love". Then Yondy - Oh cripes, that shit just sucks, I was so hoping it wasn't gonna be him, but I'm waiting patiently to see why he's nutty, oh and I'm not mad about or flaming, I just think it sucks, but hey sometimes life sucks. Poor kakashi that is totally not a cool situation and definitely poor Naruto. Does Naruto know that his dad was behind Kyuubi's death is that why he doesn't like him? I don't hink that's it cause I think he would be even more opposed to him than he is now if he did know, so then is it that he knows about his dad's creepy obsession with him?? That's still all eeewy in my mind and I have to say from now a great bIG THANK YOU that you are NOT putting any AraNaru in there, him calling out Naruto's name at the end there was icky enough. Still love this story and I think you're a fabulous writer, keep up the good work.

Oh and I forget to say, about the NaruSasu/SasuNaru question I vote switch (meaning they should mix it up). By all accounts Sasuke is supposed to be expertly trained so, he should be able to be a great lay on both ends of the spectrum. I'd need more info on character traits and circumstances to make a decision on who would be on top their first time. My advice is go with the flow of the story and let the circumstances of their encounters and how the story develops guide you, it's still too early for me to make a choice.

nyahhhh i love it ^_^ so cuuuuuute. i hope this will be a long story, cant wait for next chapter! gah whats with the bunny???

gawd i know im gonna be thinkin about this story all day >.<