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for Dealing with Love (Complete)

by Midnightstorm

person Lihrah
schedule May 21, 2007 at 12:00 AM
NO! No...nononononono...

Damnit, I'm crying now...

Why? just.../why/? Oh God...This is just too depressing for one night...

I finally finish "No Such Thing As Heroes" and despite the sad sad end and beautiful epilogue, I was feeling depressed. Then I see that "Dealing with love has been updated and I'm happy becuase I think 'Finally! Naruto and Sasuke are going to be reunited!' and it's...just so-sad.

But for your writing, I must say that it was very beautifully written. Except the end. Youhad Sasuke and Naruto part with no real explanation. I think you should have expounded on the way they were feeling toward each other at that moment and them deciding to part. Or are you doing that for the epilogue?

But that was so sad! Shit...now I'm going to have another emo week...Not blaming you ofcourse, I love you.

Do write a sequel! It just doesn't seem /right/ to leave it here. You know how sometimes you want a story to continue, but you realize it is best left where it ended? Well this isn't like that. It's just not right...SOMEONE should be haprry...well not happy exactly but you know what I mean.

Gah...I...just can't believe it...

~Lihrah
schedule May 20, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Yay a sad ending. I have been getting tired of the same old happy endings. This was actually quite refreshing. I applaude you. ^^

But all together this fic was well written, and I loved it.

Great Job.

-Akiru-
schedule May 20, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Honestly, I loved your entire story waiting anxiously for every new chapter, but I really am disappointed in the end. There's only so many sad endings a person can take and this just ruined the story for me. Don't get me wrong, I like the chapters you have written with your other stories so far, and I think you have wonderful ideas and excellent writing skills. I just wanted to express my disappointment and can only hope for a better explanation.
schedule May 20, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Ok I really liked your story. Awesome job! The only thing i really can say is that i thought the ending was rushed (although that may just be me lol.) I don't really care if Naruto and Sasuke end up together, I would prefer it... lol but either way it's your story... so yeah. Well Great job, Amazing story, and i can't wait for the next update!
schedule May 13, 2007 at 12:00 AM
O.O YOU.....KILLED....SAI!!!!!!!!! *crys* How could you! He was a good guy. OMG! They arin't going to hurt Sasuke and Iruka are they? Oh no! Kakashi better be there to save them...What if he's in on it? Oh My! Please update soon so I can stop worring about this!
person Anon
schedule May 13, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Oh poor Sai! I hate he was killed, but I hope Naruto gets to Sasuke in time. Please continue!!
person hisoka
schedule May 13, 2007 at 12:00 AM
thats sad just when their gonna get back together
update
schedule May 10, 2007 at 12:00 AM
*sits in the corner of her computer room and glaes at the innocent computer monitor on the other side* evil *she mumbled and pointed a finger accusingly at the screen* You just left me with a cliffie *tries to sniffle back tears before she is attempted to chuck the computer out the window* don't leave me hanging for long k? I want to know what happens next.
schedule May 10, 2007 at 12:00 AM
o.o wow!!!! OMG Naruto's gonna bust some balls once he finds Arashi!!!! I hope he makes him suffer, then finds Sasuke and lives happily ever after...alittle corny I know but still...
person Anon
schedule May 9, 2007 at 12:00 AM
How did Sai find out where Naruto was so fast and how will Naruto deal with the news of Sasuke being alive? Hurry with the next chapter!!!