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April 14, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Whose with who? Hurry with the next chapter please!!!!!
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April 12, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Uck! Bad Arashi.
Don't give up! There's a good story line, and I just found this story yesterday and read it all. And, well, I guess you'll do whatever you end up doing, but I think that some other people are like me - they like the story, but they don't really know what else to say.
Uhh.. *flees*
Don't give up! There's a good story line, and I just found this story yesterday and read it all. And, well, I guess you'll do whatever you end up doing, but I think that some other people are like me - they like the story, but they don't really know what else to say.
Uhh.. *flees*
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April 12, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Oh man... poor Sasuke. This is one of the only stories where I've seen Sasuke sincerely sweet! I love him more than Naruto in this one (very odd, for I love naruto most and sasuke only when he's with Naruto... yeah hehehee, he's my Naruto! I just want to kiss him senseless!) but yeah; I feel the story is a little turned around (personality wise) yet I still am hooked. (usually ooc really gets me but this... idk, you have an amazing talent I guess) which by the way, PLEASE UPDATE SOON! Ahh! I mean on that big cliffy you just leave us all? NO, no, no! Dumb Sasuke! Why?? NOOOOOOO! I must know what happens! (until then I should probably go do some writing of my own... yes hehehe :nervous laugh:) Again, please update soon!
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April 11, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Ahh! So refreshing! Something new, a great kind of new!!! Sasuke at times seems a little OOC, but then because of the situation and everything it seems normal!! And I'm starting to really like this side of him :D Naruto's a little bitchy... (stop it Naruto!!! go back being the cute uke, heehehhe) I love Naruto as uke, so can't wait to read some of that in your story XD 2 more chaps, then I'll actually have to wait till you update, Nooo, and yess... I just really wanna read more! this is great!!!
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April 11, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Those who read and don't review must be burned! Yes! They must all perish!! *manical laughter*
Yes...anyway...umm...yeah...ignore the above. I just wanted to say...again, that I just love that twist you pulled with Arashi liking Naruto in a non-fatherly way. It's real new, refreshing, all-in-all a FANTASTIC idea!! And I love you for it!!
But, he is a bit on the psychotic side, isn't he? No matter, that makes him all the moe appealing, hahaha...what am I saying? *glances at can of gatorade and reads ingredients then tosses it over shoulder* I swear that thing isn't healthy for me...enough!
Here's your review...and all the things a writer wants to hear:
You are awesome in your writing skill, it's awesomeness-ness never ceases to amaze me!! No, really. I really like this story and I hope you update soon nevermind the people who are reading and not reviewing, they are just lazy, yeah? If you're still getting lots of hits then it means people like your story and are continuing to read it even though they're too lazy to review!
CHA!
So just gon'head and keep bringing us more chaos and insane madness-ness...(courtesy of Arashi). And - oh dear! I really do hope you haven't killed Sasuke off. Or he shows up but has forgotten all about Naruto and what he is and...all that stuff. That will break poor Naru-chan's heart.
Ja, update soon...for me? *big chibi puppy dog eyes*
Ki`Tara
Yes...anyway...umm...yeah...ignore the above. I just wanted to say...again, that I just love that twist you pulled with Arashi liking Naruto in a non-fatherly way. It's real new, refreshing, all-in-all a FANTASTIC idea!! And I love you for it!!
But, he is a bit on the psychotic side, isn't he? No matter, that makes him all the moe appealing, hahaha...what am I saying? *glances at can of gatorade and reads ingredients then tosses it over shoulder* I swear that thing isn't healthy for me...enough!
Here's your review...and all the things a writer wants to hear:
You are awesome in your writing skill, it's awesomeness-ness never ceases to amaze me!! No, really. I really like this story and I hope you update soon nevermind the people who are reading and not reviewing, they are just lazy, yeah? If you're still getting lots of hits then it means people like your story and are continuing to read it even though they're too lazy to review!
CHA!
So just gon'head and keep bringing us more chaos and insane madness-ness...(courtesy of Arashi). And - oh dear! I really do hope you haven't killed Sasuke off. Or he shows up but has forgotten all about Naruto and what he is and...all that stuff. That will break poor Naru-chan's heart.
Ja, update soon...for me? *big chibi puppy dog eyes*
Ki`Tara
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April 11, 2007 at 12:00 AM
nooooooooo you cant' go on a hiatus!! not after that chapter!! you have to tell us how Naruto finds out about Arashi, how Sasuke survives, how Arashi is punished, etc! so pleast dont take a break from this story. I truly do enjoy it and would be deeply saddened if it were to be discontinued or forgotten momentarily
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April 10, 2007 at 12:00 AM
This story is pretty good it seems to focus more on the plot than the lemon, which can be good or bad thing depending on the story.I think if you kill Sasuke the interest in your story will go way down. You have good writing skills and I love your plot line. I really don't think you'll kill Sasuke as it would kinda ruin the entire story. But if you do it was still good. Try to keep writing!
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April 10, 2007 at 12:00 AM
OMG you can't leave us hanging like that!! Please update soon! I realy want to see what happens next!
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April 10, 2007 at 12:00 AM
"Don't Leave Me Hanging" is a very good chapter and it's title describes how I feel right now. Don't fail any of your classes but come out with the next one soon! ^_^ The story is really well done. Keep it up!
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April 10, 2007 at 12:00 AM
This story is actually one of my favorites to read and I would probably go crazy even more (not just from leaving me hanging on your last chapter) but if you didn't continue the story. You have a nice style of writing and it really drew me in to enjoy the story you depict of both Naruto and Sasuke. I mean, this is what you wanted to deliver and you definitely made a lot of people stuck on it! Smile and keep up the good work!