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More please! Need to know if Sasuke is going to be rescued, and Naruto's reaction, if he finds out, to his father.

I've enjoyed this story from the start. And I'm still enjoying it. It belongs to one of those I jump in joy when I see an update :)

A few pointers of the two last chapters though:
“I’m hurt...I came here to see you…got Uzumaki’s number from Orochimaru…they told me you were hear and gave me your number…Naruto-san left it at the reception. I need you here, Sasuke-kun, I came to ask for cash, but I need to get to a hospital fast.” Is one of the small things I reacted on (my guess is it should be "where you were".) ... small errors that can catch your attention. A tip - if you have the possibility to do so - print out the chapter, read it over (mark things you see is misspelled)... And then change them. I will not go into English grammar because that is something I probably suck at anyway... but small misspellings... that I can see sometimes (I know I have them too even if I read the same chapter over and over again...)

Still - this is one of the most "bestest" stories I've read in my life. So don't let the "misspelling"-note above take down your writing-sprit.

Until next time....
Live long and prosper as Mr. Spock would say.

This story is amazing! PLEASE don't stop writing! You would make me depressed for like a month. At least! I worship you!
This chapter was fantastic! I'm dying to know what happens next, so please update as soon as you can!
xoxo,
Yukino

this chapter's great... hope you'll update soon... (^^,

Sorry I don't review as often as I should. But I really do love your fic. A LOT.

I think you have a good story going here. Don't let the number of reviews (which isn't bad by the way) discourage you. Some people just don't know what to say I suppose. I know I have that problem a lot, although I do try to at least say something in a review. I think this story is interesting. It weird to see the fourth as a bad guy, but I like it. It's different. I hope you inspiration picks back up. I do want to see what happens next in this story.

I hope Sai can help Sasuke. Now that Naruto knows that Sasuke love him, what will he do? Hurry with the next chapter!!

i love your characters personalities~
so cute
i dun actually care about sai but in your story~
his so much better~
i wish there were more parts where naruto confuses sasuke even more~
cuz vunerable sasuke is so hard to come by these days lol
like it, love it~!

Great chapter, but gosh Sasuke is falling but Naruto is like a rock that won't budge past Kyuubi, I know she's dead but I still don't like her.

I love the story! i love most stories! Does that make me a bad person?