rate_review Reviews

hey, so far the story is developing well, good job!

I like this story alot even if it creeps me out to see Arashi being such a creepy bastard, for me a new refreshing idea about the "yellow flash". It's a good build up in the story and very well written/told. I get sucked in every time I read it.

One thing annoys me and that is the warnings you put up for when it "lemon-ish". I understand that you do that if you post on ff.net. But here it just gets annoying. I know that there are underagers here reading and even get themselves membership *snarls* But the warnings are unnecessary here. It's called Adult fanfiction.net... So if it's not too much trouble, please skip them in the future.

Best wishes from a fellow writer...

Another great chapter. Yeah the manga was AWESOME! I can't wait to see what happens next (in the manga and in this story)! Um..is Gaara the guest? or Neji? Maybe that's wishful thinking because I love the two of them...lol

LOL. trust Naruto to get jealous of a plushie. and what slasher's guide to gay sex?! i want to read, sounds interesting. xDDD anyway, do continue writing.

Nice update! Story is really coming along. That small lemon bit was quite nice i think. Not everyone goes and has sex right away, especially in Naruto's case here. It was fitting. Lol, that plushie bit was funny. Plushie's are fun to have though aren't they? I'm sure Sasuke putting Naruto in his own bed was done out of goodness and consideration to Naruto and not because he would prefer the plushie....right lol? So who's at the door huh? Oh and interesting gay-sex facts btw.

And YES that last cap was GOOOOOD. Way to go Sasuke. Even though i don't think he's necessarily "good" he's actually doing a good thing. Anyway, update soon!

AHHHH Cliffy!!!!

Wow I can't wait until the next chapter comes out!

It must be a day for cliffies! I'm glad yo uupdated! I can't wait to see what happens in the next chapter. So suspenseful! You just got to love Naruto and Sasuke...I am loving this story so much!

Cool story! Update soon! ;)

Arg! Cliffies! Anyways, I like the story all though at times Arashi really creeps me out (but I guess that is what you are trying to accomplish). I hope you get a surge of motivation and plow through the remaining chapters, but I understand what it is like to just not want to do the work. Love the story. Ja!

i dunno why, but the thought of Arashi and Naruto is kinda.. hot ._.; SO I WANNA SEE SOME OF THAT!^^;