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for Before Death

by Hiiroshoken

schedule October 6, 2007 at 12:00 AM
You are KILLING ME! I gotto have the rest of this story. Please SOON!
person saxis
schedule February 5, 2007 at 12:00 AM
That was a great chapter! I loved it! And I love this fic!
Can't wait to read more!
schedule January 22, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Im glad you updated! So looks like Sasuke has got Naruto on his mind and Naruto is giving himself up to Itachi. The Rookies are pissed, i'm sure. I understand Naruto's reasonings but geez. And Itachi...well as msyterious as always...Anyway, update soon!
schedule January 21, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I cant wait!! It was a great chapter... very interesting and informative... keep it up!!
schedule January 20, 2007 at 12:00 AM
ah, as per usual my dear, you always amaze me with your talent. (you've got a HUGE talent!) but seriously, that was wonderful. sad. i love orochimaru because his tongue is arousing. i feel for sasuke though. and naruto. i just hope that things don't get to bad for the blonde because of his deal with itachi.

beautiful, dear. i just want them to get together already! kind of like your comment, "OH JUST GO ON AND HAVE SEX ALREADY!" teh.
person saxis
schedule January 20, 2007 at 12:00 AM
This fic is great! You write really well!
schedule January 16, 2007 at 12:00 AM
awesome work, dear. once again i am in awe of your talent (yes, talent). i can't say i know much about these characters, but i think you explain them well enough that those of us who aren't as into the show can still enjoy the plotline of your fic.

that lemon-esque eating amuses me. its totally going to throw people off (and potentially piss them off) which makes it all the more amusing. although i must say it has the be the creepiest way of describing barbeque chicken, if i do say so myself (not sure i'll eat it again). ^_^

love you dear.
schedule January 15, 2007 at 12:00 AM
whatever you do, dont stop writing... I need to know what's next! please!!! I love the idea of an excecution cadre for Naruto's foolishness...nyan! I didnt see Iruka, nyan... maybe he is already at his bedside? *ROFL* that was great!!!