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for When Mercury Mixes With Jade

by elaynabrooks

person Sharon
schedule August 16, 2015 at 12:00 AM
Omg i love this story and i just want more please finnish this story i want to know how it ends!
person TAMEIKA
schedule February 7, 2014 at 12:00 AM
i dnt know what to write in the review i have never written one I'm only here for your books ! i love this pairing fell in love with it ! because of you i switched from sakura is annoying and shino is cool to i wannah have shino's babies and i freaking love sakura this was not boring !with all the diffrent pov i kept freaking out because every pov is giving me a diffrent feeling i cnt wait untill shino and sakura meet up again and sasuke sees sakura this is amazing ! i almost forgot about the guy who wants sakura ughhh power hungry asshole !plss update soon and i just love your work !
person Wickedone43
schedule August 15, 2012 at 12:00 AM
I have waited faithfully all this time. I will continue to wait for you to update. Hope you can get around to it sooner than later. Thanks again for this fic. I too am a Shino and Sakura fan.
person Anon
schedule June 21, 2012 at 12:00 AM
Yay! You updated! Thank you, thank you, thank you!

I personally think Itachi is hot! Glad to see Sakura is trying to clear him if anything just to piss off Sasuke.
Suika coming back...what will happen to Shibi and his wife? Still like the conflict this poses.

I am selfish and want you to be writing just to appease my hunger for entertainment so please, UPDATE SOON!

No pressure :)
schedule March 26, 2012 at 12:00 AM
I think...you just made me fall in love with this pairing. (I used to pair Shino with Hinata, and Sakura with Sai...but, you're making me rethink that. XD And, actually, I was working on a story at one point...it reached over 100 hand-written pages before I scrapped it, that would have eventually been Sai/Sakura and Shino/Hinata, but I did plan to write Shino/Sakura at some point in the story...and, no, not really as smut, but, as a relationship dynamic, if that makes any sense. It also had Sakura's mom confessing to having the hots for Shibi when she was Sakura's age. haha perhaps Aburame/Haruno was just meant to be. XD ) Your story is epic. I love that it's so plot-heavy, and not just smut. And in regards to your latest chapter (which is chapter 10) despite it being "boring" it's most definitely good. Chapters of that nature are sometimes needed, I think. Your writing style has improved drastically since when you first started the story. I do love the latest twist involving Itachi and Sasuke, but, I am also curious to know if the creepy obsessive character that wants Sakura for himself will be making a return.

I will be patiently waiting for more of your brilliant story! ^^ You're going to be the first person on my recommended reading list as soon as I get my lazy butt over to the forums and figure out how to do it. XD
person MrsCake
schedule January 19, 2012 at 12:00 AM
Interesting, we meet two new characters in the story then Sakura and Shino get their own other worldly training. I like! Here's hoping Shino gets his act together and woos Sakura properly.
schedule July 8, 2011 at 12:00 AM
niiiiice!
person MrsCake
schedule July 4, 2011 at 12:00 AM
That update was a good mix of sexy and sweet. I especially like the transitions for both Shino and Sakura to become kickass shinobi. Happy 4th of July!
person Anon
schedule July 1, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Wow! They are both getting extra training. I sort of goes with the Naruto type of thing...his training with Ero Sennin. Did I spell that right?
Anyway, I just love the pairing so much that you had me at, " I am back..." whatever else you said. I will wait patiently as I did for more than 3 years! I am but a faithful follower. I await your update. :)

person Anon
schedule June 30, 2011 at 12:00 AM
OMG!!! Yes! You are back! There is a God!

I have been waiting for an update on this fic. This is my favorite pairing! I saw your other id at FF.net. I can't tell you how happy this made me! Happy 4th of July to me!!! Yes!!! Thank you,thank you, thank you!

Okay I will read the rest of my fic. If you will excuse me....