rate_review Reviews

I really hope you are still working on this story. I came across it today and I just love it. I can't help but to love Shino, he's soooooo cool! Please continue this story, you have worked so hard on it. I can't wait to read more.

I really love this story, and it is a good pairing because of they're not many Shino/Sakura fics. It's very descriptive(which I have enjoyed very much). I'm a little puzzled as to who the mystery man is who wants Sakura so badly, and the plotline is very addictive so in a way it makes the story more addicting to read. I hope that you will update soon. I was wondering by any chance if you had any interests in English courses in college because you seem to have a knack for it. As a fellow writer like myself, I would like to get a few pointers from you to expand my writing effortlessly.

I LOVE THIS STORY!!!!! please keep up the gteat work...

Hey, that was interesting. Knowing Shino, I always thought the love declaration between those two would be a lot more private, but heck that was even better than I expected. Too bad I couldn't listen to the song you put while the girls danced, but your descriptions gave me a pretty good image of what happened and how it happened.

Also, no matter how hard I tried, I just couldn't put a face on that nameless villain that appeared at the end. Man, this story is getting so cool! Please update soon, OK?

Yet again I was completely entralled with this chaper. The passion, the mystery, I was at the edge of my seat (or in my case the bed). If Kishimoto read this I wonder what he'll think. Probaly think we are a bunch of crazy fangirls. Thanks for making me love Shino even more, who unfortunetly doesnt get enough air time. Anyways though I am going crazy to see what you write next do take your time it makes it all the sweeter.

Mmm, lovely. You make me very happy. lol.

Mmm gettin' a bit touchy feely 'ey Shino?
Lol, great chapter and its really long, you have just made my day, seriously!
Thanks for updating it sooner than expected, omg 8D!!! Sorry crazy moment there, neways, hope you had a Merry Christmas and a Happy New year :) I know I did!
And much love to you for your writing skills and this plot, I saw the pairing Shino/Sakura and I was like, 'what the hell why not' careful now you might just be converting me, I know I've now added the pairing to my list! most definatly.
I just love Sakura, you can put her with almost anyone and have it work out... depending on the story and her personality of course, but still shes flexible. She seems to get along and fit quite easily into things.
Sorry about skipping around with topics, I'll just leave you to your own devices. Till the next update! I'll see you then! :)

The performance the girls put on was beautiful! If I was Sakura, hell yeah I would slap him. All that effort and his parents hinting how much work she put into it and he still said "You didn't have to do this for me"? Really liked that steamy discussion though. Hee hee. I might take you up on that offer. My beta ran a Shino/Sak idea by me and I'm still wondering if it has enough potential.

I spent a day and read all eight available chapters(between doing other things). I really enjoy your imagination. I like the Shino/Sakura pairing, although I like many other pairings. I'm interested in where this fiction is going. And "WOW" to you if it really will be 40ish chapters. Other then a few grammatical errors and tense issues, you've got a good start on those 40 chapters. Keep your ideas flowing, even if it is at some weird hour of the morning.

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Do you realize how much this chapter brought out the girl in me? I had to take breaks from reading to giggle and jump up and down in excitement!!~ Me!! I'm highly cynical and gag at mush and your story changed me into total sappy girl mode. I have a stupid grin that won't leave my face. (And I love it! ^^) hehehehehehhe



This story is awesome. I can't for your next 32 chapters. (damn. thems alot of chapters... Keep up the good work!)