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for When Mercury Mixes With Jade

by elaynabrooks

person Anon
schedule July 25, 2007 at 12:00 AM
This is so good!!! Sorry about the heat there, but maybe that is to our benefit. This is such a good fic! I love this pairing. Keep it coming!!! Awesome!!!!!!
schedule July 21, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Thank you for updating!!! So this was sweet and revealing, now where to next? I just love an embarrassed Shino, he is just so cute!
person MrsCake
schedule July 21, 2007 at 12:00 AM
A beautifully written story. This chapter was wonderfully bittersweet. Thank you.
schedule July 21, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I just found this story today and it is so beautiful. I really like the contrast between shino and sakura beacuse she's kind of like nature and he's a bug so he finds himself at home with nature....i hope that made sence lol. Love this story so much i really cant wait for the next update. ^_^
schedule July 21, 2007 at 12:00 AM
It. Was. Awesome. I'm so so so happy you finally kicked writers-block's ass! Keep going, hurry before it comes back!
schedule July 21, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Hey! I've only finished reading the first chapter, but I really liked your story! Too bad Saku-Shi is not a very popular pairing. Anyway, I'm going to keep on reading. Keep it up!
person Anon
schedule July 19, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Ah....so what happens next? I have read this fic about 5 times already! I just love the plot and the whole setup!! Come on!!! Don't leave me hanging!!!! What happens next? Hurry!!!!
schedule July 4, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Um... you havn't given up on this story HAVE YOU?!

Cause that would suck, just so you know. I adore this story. It's very well done, with an awesome plot and writing skills.

Wish I could do that *pouts*

Oh, and don't let that obsenely long complainy (not a word I know) review get you down. I can't speak for anyone else, but theres no way it made stop reading.

Love Ya! Riane
person stranger
schedule June 23, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Hello! I came by to review ur story! And i must say that its absolutely beautiful! I love Shino and Sakura pairing and well Neji and Sakura ok basically every guy in the Naruto series thats around her age! Lol im making her turn out as a slut! What im trying to say that i love how ur story is well descriptive it gives us the readers are more in depth of the atmosphere surrounding the story line!!! I love it!!! I hope this is ur millionth feedback on how good the story is structured!!! Please update soon!!!!! Excellent story ^.^
person Anon
schedule June 16, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Man this is so good!! I really like this pairing...okay I like Sakura with Kakashi too, but with Shino is so much more....hot!!! He is always so quiet and such....COOL!!