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for Happy Birthday

by anndragera007

person inumoon3
schedule September 10, 2009 at 12:00 AM
I liked it!
person Kaellyn
schedule March 14, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I loved the story. Short and sweet, and very entertaining. Keep up the good work, I can't wait to see your next one.

BTW, based on the current exchange rate, $10,000 is equivalent to 1,006,307.76 Yen. At least, according to www.xe.com, a currency conversion website I found a few years ago.
person despairs
schedule March 12, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Aww! I love this story. It made me cry so much...but in a GOOD way, of course.
This was your first story? Wow, i'm so impressed! Now i can't wait to read your new one.
By the way, i loved your idea for Sasuke's birthday gift to Naruto. And the end when Iruka
was checking up on him and saw the two boys together...that was SO sweet. Thanks for writing!
schedule March 12, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Awww that was so cute! I like this, it's very sweet and Iruka is one of my fave characters, so it's nice that you included him too! Good luck with your new fic too!
person Word_Slave
schedule March 12, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I'm glad you posted the note, because I got to read this!! It was great! Thanks, and I know what you mean about long stories, but mine just keep growing and growing.... damn plot bunnies.
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person Gwyllion
schedule November 30, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Oh gods....! You don't know how rare it is to find a piece of treasure such as your fic. I enjoyed this immensely! I'm not even embarrassed to say that I cried on chapters 2-3. Such a sad and lonely life Naruto's must have lead. *hugs and coddles him* No child should ever experience such suffering and I found that you wrote that part extremely well. It tore my heart so bad.....this shall be one of my very favorite pieces. I just wished it was longer though, but ah well. Am so glad that Sasuke was there to comfort him. Now...If I could get these tears to stop running..... Thank you so much for writing this. :D
schedule October 11, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Heh, took me a while to read *slow reader* But well worth it ^_^

Oh man a few chapters had me crying but I LOVED that, I love a good story that can bring tears to my eyes. This story was just too great *giggles* Loved the masks...I didn't see that coming XD

Thanks for the review on my oneshot and for recommending your story ^^ I liked it a lot!
schedule July 5, 2007 at 12:00 AM
A.D.D. (haha!) thank you so much for leaving your review, for 'Sad little note' ..and if you have any other friends who like/liked Yura's story..please pass it on..god bless!
schedule March 2, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Great story, I really enjoyed reading it. Keep them coming. Few typos but nothing that really deterred from the story.
schedule January 23, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Such a fitting ending!!! I am more than happy with it and i salute you!! you left nothing out and it was quite nicely done! ^.^ Kudos, nyah!! Lovely, lovely story... its almost sad to see it end... Write another one?