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for Happy Birthday

by anndragera007

schedule January 19, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Ha, I really want to hear Naruto ask - ask - ask - ask - ask... although Sasuke is ebing a little bit mean, h could've just put him out of his misery, ne? But Sasuke will be sasuke *sigh*. can't wait for the next update hehe!

Ja!
Hina xXxx
schedule January 19, 2007 at 12:00 AM
weeeellll, one dollar is roughly one hundred yen, so 10,000 dollars is about 1,000,000 yen. If you want to be more exact with the exchange rate then you can go to an online currency converter. Anyway other than that the story's pretty good. The only problem I can see is that I doubt Naruto would be out and about on his birthday. It wouldn't exactly be a happy time for the village you know and seeing Naruto would just reinforce the fact upon them. Since Naruto's birthday would be the day the fourth died and the fox was sealed. Newborn babe and all. Anyway, update soon ne?
schedule January 19, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Oh Common!!!!!! BAH!!!! Horrible horrible cliff hanger........ 15 pages.... I was expecting some sappy goodness... but only pain and suffering. Very well written, can't wait for the 5th part!
person Mija
schedule January 19, 2007 at 12:00 AM
*sniffles* you made me cry, no fair...that was just SAAAAD...poor poor Naru baby..wants to huggle him and hold him and never let him be sad again..*wails* yes you warned me to have tissue and I did not prepare myself properly..but ooh that was good, it was sad, but you left it at a totally hopeful ending..YOU GO SASUKE! you go claim your blond and make his birthday extra special, he deserves it..sniffles..ok, I shall await patiently for the next chapter, but I cant wait to see what happenes,,ty ty for the read, twas excellent, ty again, huggles and smiles Mija...:-)
schedule January 18, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Poor Naruto - well, I'm guessing that after part 4 he won't be spending his birthday's alone, ne?

^_^nice chp. update again when you can
Hina
person Anon
schedule January 18, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I love this story!

You got to love Iruka-sensei, I am glad for him being there for Naruto on his Birthdays!!
So Naruto has a crush on the Sharingan weilder! I can't wait to see what Sasuke will
do with this information.

Great Job!Update soon!
person oraday
schedule January 18, 2007 at 12:00 AM
'Kay, so I knew Naruto was buying presents for himself the minute you mentioned the present wrapping... Actually, I knew the moment I started reading the fic, the title kinda gave it away. Of course, I fully anticipated some angst when the whole truth of little Naru' buying presents for himself because no one will give him presents came out. But....

YOU MADE ME CRY!!!!!!

Ah, it was so heart-wrenching. I think I suffocated my poor little Naru-chan plushy because I was hugging him so tightly. I just wanted to be in Iruka's place comforting the little chibi. No one deserves such pain, but I think Naruto deserves it even less. I mean, it's just so wrong!!!! But it was great. I marvel at your genius and I totally agree with you, I can definitely see this happening to Naruto in the manga... Only, he doesn't have Sasuke to comfort him 'cause that bastard left!!!

Heh, sorry, the whole time I was reading that flashback scene I just kept thinking about it actually happening in the manga and it made me uber angry that Naruto went through that and the suffering of being betrayed by his best friend/one-true love (crazy fan-girl interpretation).

'Kay, I'm just gonna thank you for writing such a great fic, even though it's agonizing reading such angst. Then again, I think the angst is just what makes this so great. And damn, I can't wait till Sasuke takes to comforting Naru-chan!^.^
person himeyume
schedule January 17, 2007 at 12:00 AM
October..... I hope Im right .... I like your fanfic i hope you update soon
person Fourthiv
schedule January 17, 2007 at 12:00 AM
This story definately intrigues me. I cant wait to read more, and I absolutely love the detail!


And if Im right about the birthday, which is easy, it's naruto's [aka october.
However, if i'm right, then this passage is off: "Hinata’s and Konohamaru’s are both in December, and that’s a month away." [it would actually be two months]

>_>
<_<
:realizes she got uber nerdy and detail orineted again:
:blush:

I cant wait until you update!
schedule January 17, 2007 at 12:00 AM
He got his own birthday gift.