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for We Intertwined

by AubreyWitch

person bishie-chan
schedule July 11, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Eeek! Please, please update with the "Sasuke-centric" chapter soon! I'd love to see how Naruto reacts to the Uchiha's pride succumbing to him...or not? I don't know! But please update soon!! :DDD
person Katie
schedule July 11, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I am a friend of bishie-chan, who just reviewed, and I completely agree with her. I would love to see Sasuke's resolve break due to the pleasure Naruto gives him...and having Naruto realize how serious Sasuke is about him as well as Sakura. Well done on the fic - please continue it soon!!!!!
person Skyaze
schedule July 1, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Wow I love this story !!!! Pls write more !!!!<(^_^)> very nice threesome fic!!
person Himitsu!
schedule June 21, 2007 at 12:00 AM
PLEASE, PLEASE update this story! I'm DYING to know what comes next!!
schedule June 15, 2007 at 12:00 AM
That was some HOT sexin right there and it aint even over! Man i gots to come into this Threesome section more foten. You did a great job on this.
person Angie
schedule June 9, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Nice.
person Himitsu
schedule June 5, 2007 at 12:00 AM
OMG, that was sooooo good. You HAVE to make the next chapter! Keep it up!
person Anon
schedule June 3, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Eeeee!!! This is exactly it! I'm the anon from the Naruto kink meme who wanted forest location and Naruto being sort of topped by the rest of the team seven. ))) This is so great, and the second chapter too! )))) It is *so* cute, emotional and hot. You can feel the love in the air, yet it's sexy. I mean, sexy stories are usually dark or angsty, and this is so cute *and* hot, perfect, and also, I have a special weakness for Sakura bossing Naruto around. Sasuke too, I'm bad ))). I'll die waiting for the third chapter!
person Terra Minuit
schedule June 3, 2007 at 12:00 AM
>> << ..More please?
schedule June 3, 2007 at 12:00 AM
O_o i love you..i really do...this story is...wow o_0 continue plssss.