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by MuseMistress

person mji
schedule January 26, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Aha, I was right, it was Mizuki. o__o I don't mind him, he was awesome, I just hate what they turned him into in that filler. *shudders* filler. -.- Anyways, keeping to things that matter. Iruka and Kakashi's break up reminded me a lot of myself. It stung, just a tad. You're not bringing Iruka back, are you? I mean with Kakashi? He's getting so scary. ._. I know it doesn't fit in your story, but I'm all for Kakashi liking Sasuke more than Iruka. But I'm a known shota fan. You shouldn't listen to me, I dirty your mind.

So, very glad that you updated. I know how it is to not being able to update frequently and all, but just take it as a compliment that I want you to hurry, ne. This fic even has its own song for me, it's crazy. XD I wish I could come up with a story line I would care about so I could write like this, about every little detail like you. Usually I find myself rushing through stories so I can get rid of them. *sigh* I'm talking you ear off, sorry. <3
schedule January 18, 2008 at 12:00 AM
it be itcomesinphases
on ur aff.net
makin ur hitcount go up
for the love
<3
schedule January 18, 2008 at 12:00 AM
And I lost all hope! I'm satisfied, almost... it saddens me how long I must wait for the sequel. Ergh... but at least I saw the scene with frosted flakes, where's Pakkun? o_o Did you write him out? Very delightful chapter, I so enjoyed their break up! (IrukaxKakashi hater...)

Where have you been on AIM? I never see you no more!
person Dragon7
schedule January 16, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Grate chapter!!!! I'm so happy that you are back and writing again. I can’t wait to read the next chapter so please keep on writing and UPDATE SOON.
person gaara89
schedule January 16, 2008 at 12:00 AM
you have to continue this! this is amazing!
person Anon
schedule January 2, 2008 at 12:00 AM
One word; Masterpiece.

I truly ADORE the way this fic is written. You are very gifted.
I usually never read AU because I don't find them intriguing but I stumbled upon your story when I was
searching for KisaIta fanfiction and since there aren't really that many fics I decided to give it a shot
even if it was AU.
I do not regret starting to read this.
The way you write Itachi and his behaviour and psychosis, it's so intriguing I can't stop reading!
And how him and Kisame make slow progress.
And all the people inbetween. Sasuke, Kakashi, Iruka, Genma, Raidou.
I am really looking forward to the next chapter.
Whatever you do, DON'T stop writing this! :O
person mji
schedule December 10, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I've thought long and hard, but I'm sticking with my initial guess. It's Mizuki, isn't it? >:3

Great as always, in any case. :D
schedule September 25, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Hey babe, it's itcomesinphases on LJ. Just thought I'd make the numbers go up for you! I re-read the last chapter and I'm waiting impatiently for the next. (Although why I'm not working on the multitude of stories that I've started, I'll never know...)
person Dragon7
schedule August 22, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Grate chapter!!!! I'm so happy that you are back and writing again. I can’t wait to read the next chapter so please keep on writing and UPDATE SOON.
schedule July 11, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Thank you for this story! It was really interesting for me, even don't know why ^^ Maybe because KisaIta is my favourite pairing. I hope you'll write more about it next time. Update soon!

Emm...I'm very sorry for my bad English ^^'