rate_review Reviews

A very intersting beginning. You really got me thinking what happened to Itachi (though you already stated it was a rape, most probably). I like the fact that you want to show Itachi as a human being and not a villain who selfishly kills his family. What's more, Itachi was not my favorite character in "Naruto" saga but you already made me like him. And guess what ... my birthday is on 17th Dec.

Oh my goodness grashious mee (lolz, cant spell to save my life)!! Totally awesome story! :D I beg of you to update and I'll be checking back everyday! ;)

I love your style of writing. It flows nicely. And I like how the points of view change subtly for the different characters. Too many authors change points of view too often and it just sounds the same so you forget who's s'pose to be telling you the story. One little thing that I have to point out because my linguistics prof would hate me if I didn't: the saying "for all INTENTS and PURPOSES" is commonly heard as "for all INTENSIVE PURPOSES" which is why you probably use the saying "intensive purposes". Just thought you'd be interested in knowing that :) I think it's interesting. But then I'm a linguistics major :) hehe Again, love your stories. Especially Tripwire.

whoaa! this caught my attention. you write long chapters, which is good (i hate short stories with grammar errors and typos!). character development is also going to be interesting.. i can only wish you luck with the fic and wait for an update :).

(btw, i like calling sasuke "sassy", too :))