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June 12, 2008 at 12:00 AM
My god, that was awesome.... Please continue....
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May 5, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Beautiful. Simply beautiful. *applauds*
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March 24, 2007 at 12:00 AM
This fanfiction totally rocks. ^^ I'm glad that i found out about you while reading A tenious grasp's reviews. *g*
I enjoy reading your writing style immensely. : ) Had to laugh hard a few times. (especially when Gai was involved)
You are not rushing anything, giving the characters time to think and sort out their feelings.
And poor Hayate. : ( Reading about him makes me sad every time.
I enjoy reading your writing style immensely. : ) Had to laugh hard a few times. (especially when Gai was involved)
You are not rushing anything, giving the characters time to think and sort out their feelings.
And poor Hayate. : ( Reading about him makes me sad every time.
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February 7, 2007 at 12:00 AM
HOT and SEXY.
Momentarily putting aside my huge thing I have for Kakashi *snickers*, Genma is the GREATEST. The "Pretty good" scene was genius. I giggled all the way through all the parts about Gai. That poor fellow! Scorned by Love in the Springtime of his Youth! The flowers...ha ha ha! Ha ha! Other than that, sexy man-sex, great dialogue, great build-up, and how did only one other person review this wonderful story?!?!
Momentarily putting aside my huge thing I have for Kakashi *snickers*, Genma is the GREATEST. The "Pretty good" scene was genius. I giggled all the way through all the parts about Gai. That poor fellow! Scorned by Love in the Springtime of his Youth! The flowers...ha ha ha! Ha ha! Other than that, sexy man-sex, great dialogue, great build-up, and how did only one other person review this wonderful story?!?!
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January 25, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I love this story, I really really enjoyed reading it.
Genma needs more love, I love you for giving it to him.
Please tell me there are more chapters to this story *puppy dog eyes*
Genma needs more love, I love you for giving it to him.
Please tell me there are more chapters to this story *puppy dog eyes*
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January 8, 2007 at 12:00 AM
For some reason I feel sorry for Gai.
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December 20, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I can't say that I love or hate this fic... it's nice to see something with Gai in it, so that is a plus BUT you went on the fanon thing that Gai's nature points to a deficiency is sexual knowledge and stuff and that is a minus.
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December 2, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I was so excited when I realized there was a sequel, I decide to reread this one first. My god--this was your first fiction--that's amazing--you're a natural! That sofa scene is so hot. But it's the romance that's the best part--so, so wonderful! This one is a classic. I don't know how you can top it, but I'm off to read the sequel--thanks again!!
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November 17, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I should be sewing a cosplay outfit for my friend, but damn you and your great Kakashi/Genma fic...really DAMN YOU. I couldn't stop...I couldn't just bookmark it and leave it for later. No...I had to read the whole stupid (and by stupid I mean absolutely fantastic) thing instead. Darn...now my friend will be mad. Must go sew. Please write more, anything, I LOVE IT! You are definitely going into my bookmark folder of favorite authors.
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November 17, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I was like what the hell... you know with the weird pairing but I started reading it and i couldn't stop. It was like crack...you know the good kind. I like how you moved from one part of the story and then back to the main charactors. It was really good. I hope to read more of your work.