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February 10, 2007 at 12:00 AM
One of the best I've ever read, an excellent mix of lemon and original storytelling. Can't wait for Part II, keep it up!
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February 9, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Hey Arcangel great story. Did you add more to the story cuz last time you stopped at the meeting with Naruto,Tsunade, and Jiraya. But anyways I love how the story is going it is just great. So Naruto just couldn't be with Hinata cuz he loved Sakura with all his heart. I guess people love the Sakura'n' Naruto. Which is a great pair. Hope to see more of your work on this site and update this story soon. I love the whole deal right now. It is very great and your writing style is good also.
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January 24, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Oooh I really enjoyed this fic! The PDA between Naruto and Sakura at their reunion was sweet and a little unexpected. I really didn't see that kiss coming! The lemon was oh so sexy and I hope theres more where that came from. I'm trying to imagine Naruto with a ponytail. I dunno if thats working for me. Aside from that, yay for this fic!
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January 24, 2007 at 12:00 AM
This story is great, you seem to have a good grasp of how you want ourt characters as well as how to write. I greatly look forward to see what part 2 is like.
Get it up soon and keep up the Awsome work
Get it up soon and keep up the Awsome work
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January 24, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Nice story but why did he leave for 6 yrs when he had a lil over 2 yrs to save the Teme from Orochimaru.... And what will happen now that Naruto and Sakura are together.... How will the battle unfold and who will be there to help everyone out...
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January 23, 2007 at 12:00 AM
wow o_O good. how long did it take for you to write this. no wonder there is only 1 more part left.
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January 23, 2007 at 12:00 AM
r u gonna continue or is that it? cause it is awsome either way.