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I just started reading this fic a couple of days ago. I need more now. I love Neji & Sasuke. God don't get me started on Itachi, Natuto & Gara, cause they are just to hot for words. PLEASE UPDATE SOON, I fear that I am now addicted to this fic. <3

Ooooh lord, what started as light and fun, ended into very creepy and sad feelings!
Gosh, Orochimaru is terrifying! I mean, just the image of him standing off somewhere, watching. At night too!
Can't wait to see what's going to happen with him next.. Is he going to make his move?

The last scene with Sasuke and Neji was touching in a way.
Neji is still trying to please Sasuke despite the trauma and fear. Sasuke gonna cuddle him goood.

Can't wait to read more!!

Holy effin Bob! That was awesome. I had been waiting for this moment for soooooo long and it was amazing. I so can't wait until your next update

Haha! Damn I've been waiting for that moment too! And it was so great! Definitely worth the wait!

Gosh! And Neji was so into it too. And so adorably clueless at times!
And Sasuke came too, this time! haha.
God I'm gonna read this thousand times over. Hehe, once again, loved the rimming and Sasuke even got Neji to ''wag his tail'' !
Neji is definitely more willing, thank God for that! And wasn't he glad when his protate was found.

I can't wait to read more!
Awesome chapter once again! SO hot!
I hope you keep writing and update soon again!

So hot! And the ending was kind of cute too.
Sasuke being all gentle (and perverted..).

Hahaha, I really enjoy Sasuke's kinks.
He sniffed the panties and the shoes as well? Damn, that's the side I like to see.
And Neji was so surprisingly willing. Thank God.
Also the thing with Sasuke, how he barely got to enjoy parents love and losing love in his life..
And how with Neji it is quite different because Sasuke is the one pursued him and the expensive gifts doesn't work, it's so.. cute. Adorable, mature, and just so plain good.

Very hot and very well written also!
I hope you post the next part soon! Keep writing and update soon again!

Take that Haruno!
Haha, I can't believe she didn't realized Jeni was actually Neji. Though.. he did fool quite a bit of people.
It's still so hot, Neji dressing in drag. haha.

Overall very good chapter!
Sasuke got his revenge on Neji biting hid dick! God, that was a hilarious moment.. But poor Neji though.
Can't wait to read more! Keep writing and update soon again!

it may be a good idea for him to hide like that for a little while longer maby that way the Brothers can come up with something to toss Snaky out on his ass with out a cent

Wow, though I have an inpresive rack to rival Tsunade's and my name is Bianca, my navel isn't pierced. LMFAO. I love how everyone's character is potrayed. Yes they are OOC but not to the point that you become irratated by it. I can't wait til Sasuke and Neji take this to a new level of intimacy. Hurry up and post the new chapter.

DAMN thats a hot tale ill be waiting for the next chapter and i do hope that you get those 2 to sit down and talk about the place to live problems as being on the streets sucks ass big time