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for An Indecent Affair

by ClaireBear

person Twiggies
schedule September 6, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Oh yes!
Really great update!
Itachi and Sasuke's past was really interesting! Well, I know it was just one part of it, but it was still good!
And the story about Haku too! The way you described Haku in that photo.. You made him sound so cute and innocent. I like it, especially if Neji looks like that too. xD

Gosh, that Orochimaru really is crazy! Insane! I mean, the way he just lost it and started throwing things in his office! Heh... Creepy, I'm loving it.
The ending: “The Hyuuga was his and his alone. He wouldn’t let anyone else have him. And if he couldn’t have him…then no one could.” That sounded really scary!
And I loved how compassionate and..kind Itachi was. And Sasuke is quite sexy when he's so angry and dangerous. xD
But I guess it just scares the hell out of Neji. :O

Really good update and awesome story!
I hope you continue writing! I love this fic, just as I love all your other fics.
LOVA YA TOO! :D
person Pen
schedule July 25, 2007 at 12:00 AM
ZOMG I LOVE IT!!!! *huggles ClaireBear* You have to post soon yeah! I like the fact the you made Sasuke considerate of Neji's phobia nad that he's trying to help. Personally, I think that Orochimaru is an evil back, but there's nothing I love more that a Neji with problems. Yes him being a tormented teen is very sexy. *nods*
Update soon! Oh, can you e-mail me or let me know when a new chapter is added? If you can e-mail me at DarkNinaRuler@hotmail.com or WingedLyra@yahoo.com

GREAT STORY!!!

-Pen
schedule July 22, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Hello darling!
I'm here again and ready for give you my review, yeah!
Okay, this chapter was pretty nice, I like the way Sasuke is traying to help Neji, and even if is hard for him, It's nice to see how Neji is slowly trusting Sasuke...and to be honest I melt in kawaiiness (is that even a word?...who cares?! XD) when Sasuke finally hug Neji, jeje.
Yay, Neji has the Uchiha borhters as his Divine Guardian Devils! (Fear me and my paradox of doom! lol)
It's a shame that actually almost any outhor can be around for too long (*it's being hit by rocks and cans 'cuz she has not update yet, actually*) but if we try to not *puff* from the ff universe for too long and come back with a nice chapter (like this one, jaja) then we are safe, aren't we? jajaja

Well, keep going and if you need something I can help you with, just email me!
See you soon then.
person soft_touches
schedule July 21, 2007 at 12:00 AM
mmm... so sexy yet odd/weird. the plan is for sasuke to touch up on neji everyother night and cure him of orochimaru. i like that. sasuke has alot of self-control, i kinda feel sorry for him cuz he probably went home with a hard-on, lol. i'm so excited for otakon tomorrow! my boyfriend iruka and i are walking around together. lol.
til i meet again...
soft_touches
person soft_touches
schedule July 21, 2007 at 12:00 AM
mmm... so sexy yet odd/weird. the plan is for sasuke to touch up on neji everyother night and cure him of orochimaru. i like that. sasuke has alot of self-control, i kinda feel sorry for him cuz he probably went home with a hard-on, lol. i'm so excited for otakon tomorrow! my boyfriend iruka and i are walking around together. lol.
til i meet again...
soft_touches
person soft_touches
schedule July 21, 2007 at 12:00 AM
mmm... so sexy yet odd/weird. the plan is for sasuke to touch up on neji everyother night and cure him of orochimaru. i like that. sasuke has alot of self-control, i kinda feel sorry for him cuz he probably went home with a hard-on, lol. i'm so excited for otakon tomorrow! my boyfriend iruka and i are walking around together. lol.
til i meet again...
soft_touches
person soft_touches
schedule July 21, 2007 at 12:00 AM
mmm... so sexy yet odd/weird. the plan is for sasuke to touch up on neji everyother night and cure him of orochimaru. i like that. sasuke has alot of self-control, i kinda feel sorry for him cuz he probably went home with a hard-on, lol. i'm so excited for otakon tomorrow! my boyfriend iruka and i are walking around together. lol.
til i meet again...
soft_touches
person Twiggies
schedule July 21, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Yay!!
This chapter was seriously cool!
I love it when Sasuke is so patient with Neji. He really likes him, doesn't he? So adorable.
I'm glad that Sasuke is trying to get Neji to his feet again..I mean, Neji's not weak or anything, but.. I'm glad Sasuke's healing Neji's wounds! That sounds better. xD
And it was so cute how Neji didn't get Sasuke out of his thoughts after that!
I hope you update soon again!
I can't wait to see what happens next.
Can't wait can't wait!!

UPDATE !
person Chaos
schedule July 20, 2007 at 12:00 AM
(Ooh, I think I got the 2000th hit! xD)
I did love this chapter, and the start of touchy-touchy for Sasuke's libido made me grin devilishly. :x *pervert* Besides the fact that Neji really WANTED him to stay... hee, pure happiness.
But I'm glad to get stuff done fast for you. I think I am quite enjoying my job. :3
*uber love for you and your writing*

And the only reason I read all those chapters in one day is because I couldn't STOP. ADDICTION, I say! xD
person soft_touches
schedule July 12, 2007 at 12:00 AM
*starts singing some song from The Lion King* 'can you feel the love tonight blah blah blaaah blah blah' ok i'll stop singing and get serious, this is my favorite chapter because its cute funny and sweet all at once. the only thing i noticed was when sasuke doodles on neji's forehead then they go to the shooting range its like he still has it on his head... you know lol when i was reading the peanut m&m part my ipod shuffled to Big Balls by AC/DC so it keeps a smile on my face every time i think about it. later ; )
aeternum,
~soft_touches~