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for An Indecent Affair

by ClaireBear

schedule April 18, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I absolutely loved this chapter!

Was so freaking awesome to read the interaction of Neji and Sasuke, is just great! Sasuke's personality against Neji's and how they are, in a way or another, to improve their relationship somehow, but I can see Sasuke is the one having even more troubles since Neji is just too afraid right now.

OMG! Neji didn't know what commando was? That was so cute, really, just so damn cute, jajaja.

So, I read that you will keep Orochimaru lurking by the way but not just now, well, that’s interesting, I just want to keep reading the story, I love the way it is going! I have to say that your fics are the most interesting I’m reading right now…

Well, My BETA is better now, she just had not finish the chapter; I hope she get it done soon jajaja.

Take care!!
person Tyra
schedule April 18, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Awwh. Yeah.
The chapter 7 was really good. Amusing.
I just love Sasuke when he's being an ass like that. xDD
And Neji.. Aawww, he's so cute! He didn't know what 'commando' means? Awh. Again I must say.. Poor Neji-chan. I would pinch him if I could! :D
Good that Sasuke and Neji are getting along so well already, thought Neji is still little scared. (Who wouldn't be after being raped by their boss?)
Hmm. Haven't heard anything about Ten-Ten recently. Good! xDD Hah. I don't really like the pairing (NejiTen) :P

Really good, goood story and very, veeeryyyy well written.:D
I hope you update soon. Can't wait to see what happens in the next chapter!
Heh!
KEEP WRITING AND UPDATE SOON.

And did I forget to mention.. GOOD STORY !
person Kare
schedule April 17, 2007 at 12:00 AM
aww, poor Neji baby *hugs Neji* i hope sasuke makes him feel better...and that he breaks up with ten-ten >.>
person silver
schedule April 15, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Please write more on this! This Sasuke is really great! I love how you wrote him. I can't wait to see Itachi.
person Casandra
schedule April 12, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I really like this story and the abusing Neji thing is something I also love even if I do love Neji he is just too fun to mess with!

I hope to read more of this!
person waltari
schedule April 11, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I love love love this story. And i really love the neji/sasuke banter that has started. EXCELLENT!! Please update soon!
person someone
schedule April 8, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Wow, this story is really good so far^-^ I enjoy the bits where Sasuke picks on Neji... he should take it up as a hobby. Just a guess, but I don't think that having security guards after him will keep Orochimaru from bothering Neji(please don't let it, you write his freakishness better than almost anyone>.<)
Please update again soon... but DON'T force a chapter out... we all know what happens when an author really doesn't want to write anything but does so anyways... -__-''' nothing good, that's for sure.
schedule April 4, 2007 at 12:00 AM
This chapter was great!

I like a lot the way Sasuke is trying more and more to know Neji and how he seems to like the Opal eyed boy a lot and how poor Neji is all confused by the circumstance around him.

I think I like this Sasuke, is very entertaining to read him, he has that kind of attitude that makes me think the words:

Someone: “Why?”
Sasuke: “Why not? *roll eyes*”

Yeah, something like that. I also enjoy Neji’s inner battle, he is still afraid and now that he is in somehow different scenario he does not know what to do or how to exactly do it and well, the plot concerning the crash of Sasuke’s and Neji’s personality is something really good.

Well, as you can see I’m still here reading your story, jeje, don’t worry I promise to write too so I’m not the only one reading. I haven’t update ADC because my beta is sick =( but I hope she gets better.

Take care!
person Tyra
schedule April 4, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Yaaay !
Aah. So Neji's now working for Sasuke? Well, that's good. Sasuke's much better than Orochimaru. xD
It was kind of funny that Sasuke was actually sitting on a Nejis desk. Heh.
Poor Neji, will you ever get away from Orochi? I hope so. And aah, Sasuke's so brave.. -dreamy smile-

Update soon. I love your story.
Sorry, this review was kind of.. lame? xDD

KEEP WRITING !! UPDATE SOON ! -SMOOCH !! -
person Gabo0
schedule March 14, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Oh please, post more soon!