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March 14, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Oh.. Neji broke the card, that's too bad.
Please, post more soon!
GaB
Please, post more soon!
GaB
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March 14, 2007 at 12:00 AM
OH my, Neji has some memory
Please, psot more soon!
Please, psot more soon!
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March 6, 2007 at 12:00 AM
*eyes watery* waaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaa this story is sooooooo touching!!!! Oh I don't want to wait, but I know I have to CURSE YOU GOD!!!!!!
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February 26, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Very interesting, I don't understand why he didn't report the rape, he has no history of anal sex and rape is damn easy to spot medically but then there would be no story.I like it alot.Intreguing (sp?).More please!
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February 23, 2007 at 12:00 AM
you know, i was a little hesitant to read this because most neji/sasuke isn't done very well, but i'm very happy that i've done so. this story is absolutely amazing. your characterization was done amazingly well, the reader, understands and knows the character, they feel everything that's happening as it happens. you're prose is surprisingly poetic.
this is a painful story. i feel so sorry for neji, i want to take him away from everything and i want to hide him from orochimaru. by the way, your portrayal of him, absolutely stunningly disturbing. i love the way you have sasuke as well, the perfect bastard. i'm very interested in the next update and certainly hope that it comes quickly. great job!
~hanyou-elf
this is a painful story. i feel so sorry for neji, i want to take him away from everything and i want to hide him from orochimaru. by the way, your portrayal of him, absolutely stunningly disturbing. i love the way you have sasuke as well, the perfect bastard. i'm very interested in the next update and certainly hope that it comes quickly. great job!
~hanyou-elf
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February 22, 2007 at 12:00 AM
*Gasp!* Neji is having mental issues, ha! Must be very dificult to him to deal wit his hum...Master-wanna be and ten trie to go back to normal only to find is not easy.
Tentes really worries about him in this story (but I still like more Sasuke to him, muhahaha...*sigh*) and I found really caring of Neji to tried to not hurt her, even if him is the one hurt at the end. (Someone said Angst? lol)
You know, I was coming back from school when I went here and saw you had update, I was all "YAY!" because, honestly, your story had just caught me, period XD.
I also have a lot of ideas and stuff in my head and I want to write them all, I wish I could do it as easy as say it, jajaja. Anyway, thanks for the chapter, take care!
Tentes really worries about him in this story (but I still like more Sasuke to him, muhahaha...*sigh*) and I found really caring of Neji to tried to not hurt her, even if him is the one hurt at the end. (Someone said Angst? lol)
You know, I was coming back from school when I went here and saw you had update, I was all "YAY!" because, honestly, your story had just caught me, period XD.
I also have a lot of ideas and stuff in my head and I want to write them all, I wish I could do it as easy as say it, jajaja. Anyway, thanks for the chapter, take care!
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February 22, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Wihii!
Another update.
I don't really care about Ten-Ten, but somehow I feel a little bad for her.
It's creepy to think that when you kiss someone, you see such a creepy face in your mind.. O_o
Heheh. Update soon. I wanna read more of this. I just love to see Neji suffer. And I love to see the smuggy Sasuke and creepy Orochimaru.. Yeah, even Orochimaru.
KEEP WRITING.
Another update.
I don't really care about Ten-Ten, but somehow I feel a little bad for her.
It's creepy to think that when you kiss someone, you see such a creepy face in your mind.. O_o
Heheh. Update soon. I wanna read more of this. I just love to see Neji suffer. And I love to see the smuggy Sasuke and creepy Orochimaru.. Yeah, even Orochimaru.
KEEP WRITING.
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February 19, 2007 at 12:00 AM
This story gets better and better! Hope you'll update soon :3 oh and who's the corps Oro was having 'fun' with before Neji? o.O (are you even planning to reveal that xD? *curious curious*) and I still don't quite get why Sasuke is so interested in Neji (yeah yeah it's an SasukexNeji fic but there's gotta be a reason right o.o; *feels dumb ._.*) nya~ waiting for the next chapter x3
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February 18, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Thank you very much for continue!
So, Neji got the guts to fight and in the end found himself in a death end, too bad but that only makes things more interesting (Yes, I love to see Neji suffer in a good plot, so what? lol)
Orochimaru is such a evil physco and you write him so cool! the way he thinks of Neji and how he wants to control it, it's just very good, since you write it so cool it makes the story even more interesting (something well done is more cool to read)
Now I get why Sasuke was upset with Neji, in the end he was kind of wanting to help him but Neji's impresion of the Uchihas is not good so the good bey to the card and lest just wait and see for more of this so cool story.
Now, about the comments on the first part. I know how you feel, I often had to write and re-write chapter until I like them and I also have so many ideas on my head and I want to write them all! I hope you find you way to write all you want and more important, enjoy doing it!
Take care!
PS: I like the comic you made
So, Neji got the guts to fight and in the end found himself in a death end, too bad but that only makes things more interesting (Yes, I love to see Neji suffer in a good plot, so what? lol)
Orochimaru is such a evil physco and you write him so cool! the way he thinks of Neji and how he wants to control it, it's just very good, since you write it so cool it makes the story even more interesting (something well done is more cool to read)
Now I get why Sasuke was upset with Neji, in the end he was kind of wanting to help him but Neji's impresion of the Uchihas is not good so the good bey to the card and lest just wait and see for more of this so cool story.
Now, about the comments on the first part. I know how you feel, I often had to write and re-write chapter until I like them and I also have so many ideas on my head and I want to write them all! I hope you find you way to write all you want and more important, enjoy doing it!
Take care!
PS: I like the comic you made
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February 18, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Yay! You updated (obviously..) !
Good chappie! More raping and Sasukeeee!
Ah, Orochimaru is such a creepy guy. I like it. xD
Good that Sasuke and Neji actually talked to each other in this chapter. Interesting, indeed.
Maah! Update soon. I wanna know what happens next. Will Sasuke be in the next chapter? If he is, is he going to be with Neji..? OMG WHAT HAPPENS??! UPDATE SOOOOON !
Good chappie! More raping and Sasukeeee!
Ah, Orochimaru is such a creepy guy. I like it. xD
Good that Sasuke and Neji actually talked to each other in this chapter. Interesting, indeed.
Maah! Update soon. I wanna know what happens next. Will Sasuke be in the next chapter? If he is, is he going to be with Neji..? OMG WHAT HAPPENS??! UPDATE SOOOOON !