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for An Indecent Affair

by ClaireBear

person Twiggies
schedule November 25, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Hilarious! XD Great chapter! And I'm glad you updated so soon.

Hehe, Jeni Hamilton is a good name! At first I thought who the hell was that, but then I realized it's just a made up name for Neji. :D
And Neji is definitely hot in female clothing. Especially when he's all hot and bothered.

Oh, and Itachi was just too amusing! He really didn't realize this ''spy'' was Neji, did he?
He should have known it was his two lover's doing. XD

I can't wait to read more! I'm craving for that Sasu&Neji interaction.
I hope you keep writing and update soon again!
schedule November 24, 2009 at 12:00 AM
ok well this A/N has put my mind at rest. I look forward to the chapter.
person serpents.vanity@hotmail.com
schedule November 23, 2009 at 12:00 AM
So you're going to be updating sometime soon, right?
Cause now I am confused as all hell.
person Tyra
schedule November 21, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Aarg! It's so evil to end the chapter like that!
...And my guess on the Who's at the door -question went down the drain! XD

But but but! Was that really Neji?! Or just some Hyuuga or what.. The ear rings were the same as Neji's though.
Ooh, too exciting! And if it was Neji.. Rawr! What an outfit! XD
That was really a surprise.

I hope you keep writing and update soon again!
I can't waaait!

Oh and, Neji should just know how worried Sasuke was/is. XD He'd fall in love with him all over again.
person Rst
schedule November 21, 2009 at 12:00 AM
What what what?! You can't just leave it there! And I swear a chapter ago I still had 10 left to read...that is so not fair! Can you update again really soon? *begs*
schedule November 20, 2009 at 12:00 AM
OMFG what is Neji doing? Was he blackmailed? Did Naruto put him up to this prank? Is it really Neji?
That was an evil cliffie >.>
person wyn
schedule October 13, 2009 at 12:00 AM
gah! *pounds head on her computer desk repeatedly* lol! who is at the door? i have been away for a while but was so happy when i came back to several updates in this story. thank you so much for sharing it, i still love this story and have even recommended it to a friend. I look forward to your next chapter!!
schedule August 19, 2009 at 12:00 AM
I am having so much fun reading this fic. Thank you for updating and I look forward to the next.

I wonder who is at the door??? Tenten perhaps?????

person Twiggies
schedule August 19, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Awh, poor Neji, totally loosing it.
Well, maybe not, everybody has those weak moments. xD
Neji's beating himself too hard, he should relax a bit.. though I undertand he's not wanting to depend on people too much.
But really, 4 days to move out? Yeah, I can also see why he CAN'T relax. XD
Yay for the tattoo and piercing though! Ginger's suuch a nice lady. 8D Doing all that and more for free!

CLIFFY! Nooooes.
I doubt it's Mr.. what was it, McCuntney? Yeeah, no.
BUT! Is it Orochimaru at the door? Or is it Sasuke?? I'm bad at predicting these. (I bet it's neither of them! haha)
It might be Sasuke, maybe he's too eager to see the piercing and the tattoo.. But would he go around almost at three am?
Orochimaru's the one who's been lurking around the corner! Scary. o.o
Or maybe.. Nah, I'll just wait and see!

Can't wait to see what happens! I hope you keep writing and update soon again!
person Jazzi
schedule August 19, 2009 at 12:00 AM
DUN DUN DUUUNNN!!!!!!!!!!!!!
I WONDER I WONDER WHOSE AT THE DOOR!
You are a wonderful author/writer whatever you call yourself. I LOVE this story very much. i jumped up and down in my seat when i saw the new chapter!
Keep up the good work!

P.S. I hope its Orochimaru... i love Neji but he's such a sexy victim!