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for An Indecent Affair

by ClaireBear

person Jazzi
schedule August 4, 2009 at 12:00 AM
OMG!!!!!! that was one of the best stories i have ever read!!! i jus read all 27 chapters. Please please please update soon.

i love Neji, but i cant help the fact that he makes a sexy victim. its his own fault...
schedule July 18, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Oh im so happy that Neji was able to admit his true feelings for Sasuke. Sasuke's acceptance and confession were all too hilarious quickly saying the words together.LMFAO!!! Poor Itachi and his vow for his baby brother and his new love makes me feel so good. Too bad about how Itachi found Haku and im so glad Itachi spared Sasuke the damage of seeing something so horrific.>.< Orochimaru really had it bad for that look im soglad Neji is being protected better so as not to get harmed further. I love the silly antics they all go thru and the little drama Neji and Sasuke put on for his brother and his lovers. Icracked up!!! XDD
schedule July 18, 2009 at 12:00 AM
aww poor guys they r really beating themselves up about the past.:( I hope Sasuke can just except his blessing of Neji coming into his life and that they r great for eachother.:)
person Tyra
schedule July 13, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Aww, what a snuggly chapter. XD That's the first thing that comes to mind.
Even though it was a little sad in a away. The ''snuggling'' was cute.
And Naruto, Gaara and Neji comes along so well. Even better than I thought.

Itachi really seems to be the only one who sees what kind of game Orochimaru is playing.. o.o

Heh, it was nice how the mood lightened up towards the ending.
Ahh, that Sasuke. Such a rich bastard, not to mention horny.

I hope you keep writing and update soon again!!
schedule July 6, 2009 at 12:00 AM
I've followed this story for a while but I don't think that I have ver reviewed. I am stoked for the update.

I've never really pictured Sasuke and Neji together, but this story portrays them well. I like how you are slowly building the relationship especially after Neji had such a tramatic experience. Many would rush it, but your pace is realistic.

This chapter had me peeing in my pants. That's what Sasuke gets! A teehee!
person satterb
schedule July 6, 2009 at 12:00 AM
I have to admit...you sure are keeping it real. LOL. I'm actually kind of thankful that these two keep running into snags like this. Oh, and I really don't think Sasukes an ass in this fic. I think he sees what he wants and just goes after it. And I really really want them to pierce Neji's dick too. Thanks for the awesomeness that is this fic!
person Twiggies
schedule July 5, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Aww, this chapter came so soon, I think I don't have to spank you this time. XD

Haha, oh my God, I love this chapter!!
Okay, at first it was hot as hell, of course.
But it was hilarious when Neji bit Sasuke's dick though! XD That's what you get when you push too far, you horny.. horny.

And Ginger is just lovely lady. Poor Neji was all lost again.
At least Naruto and Gaara was with him, though I can't say if they helped any, hah.
So ears pierced with the goddamn expencive earrings and ''something of his own choosing''? What might that be.. I mean, it's Neji. XD

I can't wait to read more. I hope you keep writing and update soon again!
schedule July 5, 2009 at 12:00 AM
lol is gaara trying to give neji a heart attack lmao. as to neji biting sasu lmfao.
person Rainshi
schedule July 4, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Oh my god you came back! I love your story and still do. I enjoy this all to much. Please contiune don't give up now.
person Twiggies
schedule July 2, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Long time no see.
Great chapter, still!

Ooh, it was little sad and serious at the end, yes. (meh, in other words, angsty)
I loved all the emotion in this chapter though. In Itachi and Sasuke's conversation.
It's so sweet (not sure if this is the right word for it, but I can't think of anything else) how Sasuke and even Itahchi are so
protective. It's really understandable though, considering what's happened with Haku and everything.. I really hope that they really
can save Neji before it's too late for him (too).

Heh, it was funny though, how Naruto just dragged Neji with him.. which caused Gaara to join them too.

I hope you keep up with the great work and update soon again!