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for An Indecent Affair

by ClaireBear

person satterb
schedule July 2, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Ummmm. I really hope you aren't trying to give us a glimps of things to come. I really really hope this has a happy ending. On another note, thanks for coming back and updating. I'd been missing this fic. Love it. And I love the characters!
schedule July 2, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Wow, That was good. I really like this story and look forward to the next chapter. Itachi, Naruto, and Gaara are so cute together. And I like Neji and Sasuke...great matches all.
person Twiggies
schedule March 2, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Oooh yes!
First of all.. Chapter 23 was soo hot!
I can't believe Neji actually asked that himself! XD Ahh, he's growing up..
And Itachi's such a bully.

And this chapter was really good too!
Yay for love confessions!! Neji finally had the gut to say it and Sasuke.. Well, I'm proud of him. lol
This was good also: '' “I don’t approve of this,” Gaara protested with a bitter attitude, placing his hands on his hips. “Neji, you can do soo much better.” ''

Hilarous, though the ending did take more serious tone.
Haku's death must've been hard for the both of the Uchiha's. And that Orochimaru!
...He stalks Neji! O_O Such a Boogie man.

I hope you keep writing and update soon again!
Really Great story!
person satterb
schedule March 1, 2009 at 12:00 AM
I'm so glad it's official now! I love this Sasuke...I think he's sooo damn cute. I'm also glad that you have Itachi looking out for Neji. I can't wait to see what happens next, and isn't it time for a lemon for our dear older brother and his two lovely pets?????
schedule February 25, 2009 at 12:00 AM
I sure am glad Neji wasn't highly pissed at Sasuke. I felt Neji's awkwardness toward everybody's stare as he walked into the office. Man, Itachi is a bully, lol. That sure did get Sasuke moving though. Im happy the way the whole chapter turned out.XDD I can't wait for Neji to tell Sasuke> *says in a whiny voice* LOL!!!
That frotting surrrrreee was a HHHOOOTTTTT ass moment!!XDD
person satterb
schedule February 24, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Oh! Thank God you let Neji forgive him. Thank God you let Neji want more. I want to see these two together so badly, that I'm beginning to get blue balls and I'm not even a guy LOL! I was happy to see you had updated this fic and I can't wait for the next chapter. I just want to see what Itachi has to say about what happened after Sasuke confessed what he did to Neji. Yay!
person wyn
schedule February 24, 2009 at 12:00 AM
fantastic! i was so worried that neji would go running when sasuke confessed. i couldn't have asked for a more perfect exchange. looks like all sasuke's effort is paying off . hurray! thanks again for the update. i adore this fic =)
schedule February 18, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Oh yeah!! Neji loves Sasuke!!! Well, maybe not love yet but it's close. Poor Neji is going to have to rely on Sasuke if he gets kicked out and wind up staying with him. Im jumping too far though, sorry im getting carried away.:) Maybe now that he recognizes his feelings as real, for Sasuke, perhaps he'll take the news Sasuke has alot better than one can imagine. I know u may not like me saying i can't wait for the next chapter, and i am not trying to rush u by saying. It's just this is such an exciting story you've written that i literally can not wait to read about another peice of Neji's life with Sasuke and Co.XDD It seems as though you've kinda maybe come up with an idea of how Neji will take the news Sasuke's going to share with him.:)
person Twiggies
schedule February 3, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Hehe, just just like to make Neji suffer, don't you? ;D

Hee, Neji's first hang over!
FIRST, and then he is said to roll a whorehouse in his appartment, with his sugar-daddies! XD
Sasuke the sweetest Sugar-daddy. 8)
Pfft, sweet my ass! If only Neji knew. ;) winkwink

Poor Neji, though it was funny to read.
He really has become more reckless. :D Sasuke has left him mark on our decent little Neji.

I hope you keep writing and update soon again!
This update came nicely fats! :DD
person wyn
schedule February 3, 2009 at 12:00 AM
new reader here. i wanted to let you know that i absolutely love your story. i love your take on all the characters and especially naru and gaara! i laughed so hard during the movie scene i thought i was gonna hyperventilate. i will be waiting patiently for your updates and thank you so much for sharing your wonderful story.