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for An Indecent Affair

by ClaireBear

person satterb
schedule February 2, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Introspection is a wonderful thing, so don't say that there wasn't much to that last chapter. I really want Neji to be able to cut loose with Sasuke, and I'm not looking forward to having him angry with Sasuke when and "if" he finds out what happened at the bar. As intelligent as he is, why would he drink something some perfect stranger handed him. Just don't let him be too angry with Sasuke...pleeeeaase?
person dragonslayer
schedule February 1, 2009 at 12:00 AM
I love this story so much! I check everyday to see if it's been updated!
person Twiggies
schedule January 30, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Heh, I was just reading this a couple of days ago, and when I (just today) saw you had updated
I almost went nuts! 8D

HA! That slimy Kabuto. XD
It's almost too fitting that he has own a pharmacy.
But this time though, he wasn't the devils right hand.. He was the devil himself! XD
And damn, was that drug powerful.

Thank God Gaara noticed them. They got lucky.
So did Sasuke, it seems! Gosh, how will live with the guitl? XD It was hot for me though! 8DD

I hope you keep writing and update son again!
schedule January 30, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Damn!!! Sasuke just had to didn't he? Well, hopefully Neji won't ditrust him or blow a gasket. He might not even remember. I was worried Kabuto would succeed with his dastardly plan but thank God Gaara was watching out at the entrance for Neji. The struggle between him, Naruto and Neji was funny as HELL!!!! I can picture a soaked Gaara with eye make-up running down his face too with wet hair stuck to his face. Whoa!!!!XD This was a great chapter, I love this story so much I can't wait for Neji's reaction when Sasuke tells him what he did to him.^_^
person satterb
schedule January 29, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Ok, I just had a marathon reading of all 22 chapters, and if this were a novel I wouldn't have been able to put it down. It started out great and kept getting better. I also want to congratulate you on the "movie" scene. I thought I would die laughing...my daughter had to ask me if I was ok, I was laughing so danm hard. This story has it all...comedy, sweetness, sexiness, angst and about a hundred other good things to offer any reader. Thanks for the wonderful story, and I can't wait to see the next update!
schedule November 22, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Aww, But I want Orochimaru to be there!!, jajja, don't worry, I'm sure you have something else for now here and I want to read it, so, I'll check it out when it's done.
schedule November 13, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Hey!!! I've finally caught up to this chapter from chapter 1 and I am really enjoying this story. I love the way Sasuke is portrayed in this. He's actually someone I'd love to meet and fall in love with.:) Poor Neji is lost somewhere in the bar. I can't imagine there is a new predator out there with him. Maybe he just got mixed up and left or got lost. He was kinda tipsy. Well, I can't wait to find out what happened to him. He's so sweet and adorable. Well, just wanted to start reviewing since I'm all caught up. Thanks. I LOVE YOUR STORY!!!!!!
person dragonslayer1
schedule October 30, 2008 at 12:00 AM
HURRAY ANOTHER ONE YES YES YES NEJI IS SO CUTE WHEN HE GETS BUZZED. Ooooh I hope Neji gets so upset about what Orochimaru does that he in some ways feels like he has to do it with Sasuke then gets addicted to sex to the point where Gaara may notice and try to do a little nasty with him. oh my I"m so naughty
person Twiggies
schedule October 26, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Yays. It was nice to read a new chapter! xD
And it was great!
Ah, good little decent Neji. He got tipsy after two drinks?
Keh, It's good that Neji didn't seem appalled from Sasuke's sexual aberrations. xD
And it was funny how curious Neji was. Hehe, the pie-things and man-things!
But oh lala! Itachi using viagra?! That's too good. Not like haha hilarious good, but a really good detail! xD And it's good to know it's only because of the stress!

Hmm, seriously I have no idea what's happened to Neji, if it's not Orochimaru. Maybe he just went to the bathroom, he did got hot, nee? lol xD

Can't wait to read more! I hope you keep writing and update soon again!
person Anon
schedule September 24, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I'm hungry for more! It felt like ages since the last update! I hope the next one is sooner.