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February 24, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Holy crap! Woo! Go Sasuke! Poor Neji, he must be so embarrassed, but its a good thing! Gah, I really think you make Naruto and Gaara so funny in this. I wonder what kind of havoc they would make having their food eaten. Great job as always!
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February 15, 2008 at 12:00 AM
O_O ooooh my GOD!!! THERE IS A GOD! IT'S A MIRICAL!!! I LOVE YOU MORE!!! HURRAY ANOTHER CHAPTER AND A SPICEY ONE TOO! YES YES GOD YES!!
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February 15, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Wow.
That was awesome! xDD
Nyah, it was really amusing to read about Neji's childish behavior. xD It was so cute.
And it started that hot and passionate kissing scene..
Which led to the even more hot scene. xDD
Sasuke and Neji surely are making progress. It's good.
Poor Sasuke though, he didn't get his much needed release. xDDD
Well, that day is still coming.
Naruto and Gaara, once again, they are so adorable!
Poor Naruto's butt is sore.. Right for him though.. xD
I hope you keep writing!
I really wanna know what the blond and the red-head is going to do now! xD
That was awesome! xDD
Nyah, it was really amusing to read about Neji's childish behavior. xD It was so cute.
And it started that hot and passionate kissing scene..
Which led to the even more hot scene. xDD
Sasuke and Neji surely are making progress. It's good.
Poor Sasuke though, he didn't get his much needed release. xDDD
Well, that day is still coming.
Naruto and Gaara, once again, they are so adorable!
Poor Naruto's butt is sore.. Right for him though.. xD
I hope you keep writing!
I really wanna know what the blond and the red-head is going to do now! xD
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February 9, 2008 at 12:00 AM
HURRAY YOU UPDATED*lets out the doves*
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January 30, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I love this story and can't wait to see what happens next. PLEASE UPDATE SOON.
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January 30, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Wow..that was a very emotional and intense chapter..I enjoyed it very much..keep up the good work, I'm looking forward to your next chapter.Please update soon! 8D
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January 29, 2008 at 12:00 AM
this is such a beautiful story. keep writing and I'll keep reading. poor neji
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January 27, 2008 at 12:00 AM
This chapter was nice,
It's a Shame Neji was having a panic attak that strong, but it was very razonable, I wonder what's going to be Orochimaru's move in the future.... and what are going to do the Uchiha Brothers about it?
I really want to know.
See you next time!
It's a Shame Neji was having a panic attak that strong, but it was very razonable, I wonder what's going to be Orochimaru's move in the future.... and what are going to do the Uchiha Brothers about it?
I really want to know.
See you next time!
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January 26, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Oh, geez... I didn't get to beta this one. My laptop went up and died on me a few months ago, so I can only get on the computer two or three times a week at best. I'm so sorry. ;-;
I liked this chapter, though. I love Sasuke's childishness that he just WON'T get over because he's a biotch, and I love the fact that you make Itachi likable. =] And Orochimaru is a creepy rapist, as usual.
But I giggled at the name Mr. Ishida... heh. Ishida.
So yeah, I didn't deliberately try to ignore you. My computer is just crap. Much love to you. <3
I liked this chapter, though. I love Sasuke's childishness that he just WON'T get over because he's a biotch, and I love the fact that you make Itachi likable. =] And Orochimaru is a creepy rapist, as usual.
But I giggled at the name Mr. Ishida... heh. Ishida.
So yeah, I didn't deliberately try to ignore you. My computer is just crap. Much love to you. <3
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January 26, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Mmmm, first time reviewing on aff.net, but I figured your stories more than earned it. =) You have no idea how excited I was to check your profile for updates to find TWO stories updated. I actually cheered at my computer.
Ahhh, uke Neji. So hard to find good stories with him in that position, but you do it well. Even though he's supposed to be A-Ranked I still think you pull off his personality pretty well, I mean you're allowed to take some slack with it because this is AU after all, but aside from his break downs, which are understandable, you capture his attitude fairly well I think. It's more relaxed, but seeing as he isn't a ninja in this story that would make sense.
=) Keep it up! I love all of your stories and I'm glad to see you haven't let them die.
Ahhh, uke Neji. So hard to find good stories with him in that position, but you do it well. Even though he's supposed to be A-Ranked I still think you pull off his personality pretty well, I mean you're allowed to take some slack with it because this is AU after all, but aside from his break downs, which are understandable, you capture his attitude fairly well I think. It's more relaxed, but seeing as he isn't a ninja in this story that would make sense.
=) Keep it up! I love all of your stories and I'm glad to see you haven't let them die.