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for Chained

by Semma

person Simca23
schedule April 12, 2007 at 12:00 AM
aww thats cute yet sad i hope you add another chapter soon i cant wait to read more of your work -_^

val
schedule February 11, 2007 at 12:00 AM
oooh i like it.. but poor kiba :( i dont really feel sorry for neji though because he's a bitch in most stories i've read ^_^ lol.
schedule February 7, 2007 at 12:00 AM
ooohhhhhh... the tension!! the heat!! Gosh! I cant wait for more!! Update, ne? You captured the guilt and the thrill of cheating pretty well, nyah... you've got me hooked... Dare we hope for a foursome? *cheeky grin* keep it up, ne?
person animehead
schedule January 31, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Overall I liked the latest chapter. There are some grammatical errors and stuff, so you might want to read over it, but nesodes that it was great! I can't wait to see what is going to happen!
person Anon
schedule January 29, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Talk about major sexual tension between those! Hurry with the next chapter!!!
person animehead
schedule January 28, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I really like this so far. I'm sure others have told you that you need to space it out some. I don't mine beta'ing for you, but that is your choice. I look forward to your update. I don't think I've read anything like this before.
schedule January 27, 2007 at 12:00 AM
It is interesting to see a cheating Naruto. I like your story even if it does need some cleaning up. Keep up the good work!
person barara
schedule January 27, 2007 at 12:00 AM
i really like it! i wonder what's gonna happen @_@