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April 26, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Yes it was good for me to.
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I like it bunches. ^^
First Naruto Sakura fic ive really liked so far.
you should continue. ^^
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I like it bunches. ^^
First Naruto Sakura fic ive really liked so far.
you should continue. ^^
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April 14, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I MUST know what happened with him and Kiba... and we need more NaruXsaku sex with her gettin g preggo, and of course Kyuubi Action.
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April 10, 2007 at 12:00 AM
O.O
that was amazing!
i really loved it, it's short and probably the sweetest little fanfic for naruto and sakura.
CONTINUE THIS PLEASEEEE.
and if not then i think you should make a new one ^____^
GREAT job.
that was amazing!
i really loved it, it's short and probably the sweetest little fanfic for naruto and sakura.
CONTINUE THIS PLEASEEEE.
and if not then i think you should make a new one ^____^
GREAT job.
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March 19, 2007 at 12:00 AM
AWESOME!!! Ero-Sennin Approved!!! **^_~
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February 13, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Kiba? WTF?
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February 9, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Hmmm very interesting story so far. Don't tell me Naruto and Kiba kissed or something like that. That would be a mood killer if you ask me. What about more details about the story.
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February 9, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I knew some people wouldn't like the mention of the other pairing..but I'll put up a warning if I do a chapter with them in it ^.^ I'll try to continue either way, but still thinking about where to go with it.
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February 9, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Okay, I have one little suggestion for you. That second to last paragraph? The one with all the hot smexiness in it (well, most of it anyway)? That should be split up. No paragraph should ever be that long. And there was dialogue in it even. Dialogue ALWAYS gets a new pragraph.
Other than that, I have nothing bad to say about this story. Excellent work, I look forward to more from you!
Other than that, I have nothing bad to say about this story. Excellent work, I look forward to more from you!
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February 9, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Okay, that was a little sudden, but a good lemon nonetheless. Are you making Naruto bi in this story? I'm not sure of I like that idea, but that seems to be what you're suggesting.
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February 9, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Wow now that was a really really good chapter and I cann`t wait to read more so please update soon