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for One Thing I Hate: COMPUTERS!

by FoxyS30

person Eternel
schedule March 12, 2007 at 12:00 AM
that was so hot...
person Andi-chan
schedule March 8, 2007 at 12:00 AM
OMgosh!! I love this story!!!

Sasuke's such a manipulative bastard. XD

Poor Naruto...
(Go Sasuke!!!!)
*cough cough*
:D

Can't wait to read the next chapter!!

-Ja, Andi-chan
schedule February 26, 2007 at 12:00 AM
-fans self with mouse mat- daaaamn... we definetly need more of this! my brain squealed and just about died when i read this chapter... gawd it was hotness personified! great job and simply cannot wait for more!
person VRon8899
schedule February 21, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I just wanted this chapter to go on and on! lol. XD Can't wait for the enxt installment!!
schedule February 21, 2007 at 12:00 AM
So Sasuke is going to make the rules up as he goes just to get Naruto to do as he pleases…smart bishi. Well I love the fic and seeing as you just updated I won’t beg for one but I’ll ask that you don’t forget about this fic.
schedule February 20, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Damn...You two are great writers.

SAI! :D

This is a great story, and as a few people had said before me, is written in character too.

SAI! :D

Though I wonder if Naruto is going to try and turn the tables on Sasuke.

SAI! :D

I am a Sai fan! Got to love the perverted, artist ninja.
schedule February 19, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Ahh, finally I get a chance to review >_< this was such a great chapter, I love how posessive Sasuke is, eventhough Naruto isn't even his yet! Hehe, Jealous!Sasuke is the best ^__^ This story is shaping up wonderfully, I can't seem to get enough of it. I'm so glad I found Proper Way to Play Strip Poker and reviewed it, because I got my fix of this story earlier :D you both are made of win, love ya guys!!

And Animehead, I'm honored that you'd give me a prompt! I can't wait to write it! ^__^
schedule February 19, 2007 at 12:00 AM
nyah!! so hot! Sasuke is really bad... and poor Naruto... with dreams like that, its a wonder he is able to walk... nyah!! Great chapter!!! Really enjoyed it... specially the dream... that was really something!! Nyah! XD
person Anon
schedule February 18, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I finally got to read this. Aww, it's cute. It makes me giggle like a fangirl. Oh, I am one. Naruto's uber cute, I loved all the messages he sent to Sasuke. I could just see him sticking out his tongue while writing them. Hmm... I assume Sasuke's gonna use that nice pic for blackmail purposes. I always like when there's competition for Sasuke, so Neji flirting is nice. Aww it makes me sad that Sasuke has to resort to blackmailing Naruto though, but it is kinda fun XD
person Allys
schedule February 18, 2007 at 12:00 AM
LOL, so glad I can give back even a small amount of the pleasure i get when I read your fics :D.

As for today's offering Hmmmnnn XD Muahaha, I see Sasuke's megalomanic tendencies are kicking in. LOL so much fun. Naruto's dream was kick ass, you have forever warped that song in my brain, and all I can say is "Thank you". Can't wait to see the punishments, always knew Sasuke was a whips and chains kind of guy XD.


Oh and P.S. - You're so sweet I can't believe you went and you read that, LOL.