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by FoxyS30

schedule February 18, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Isn't Sai the greatest?! i cant wait to see him in the anime. *squeals* they better include the parts when he's asking about naru's penis and the scene at the onsen. Sai: "oh. so you DO have one?!" *eyerapes Naruto* lol.

oh sugar, sasuke has taken steps towards getting in naruto's pants. man, i can't wait to see what's gonna happen in that room. sasuke's probably gonna punish (molest and mark) the poor blond for letting neji get so close. looking foward to your next update. ja!
schedule February 18, 2007 at 12:00 AM
You guys - to me that was GENIUS looool the way the whole dream just switched hehe, and I gasped and went 'OH NO' because I thought Sasuke had posted the pic of Naruto's *clears throat* I thought he really is a bastard if he does that and then - he juts goes and proves it anyway hehe - STAY AWAY FROM HYUGA hahaha that was good and the wholse shove Naruto up against the lockers and molest him (well not molest - you know what I mean) was H-O-T!!!! Hehehe, can't wait for the next update. You guys ROCK ^_6

Hina xXxx
person celticfx
schedule February 18, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Lol, I love Sasuke's aggressive side! I bet Naruto is in for some big surprises. I can't wait to see what other rules Sasuke has in store for him. ;) I wonder how their online relationship is going to tie into this?? I'll try my best to be patient!
person Mitamay
schedule February 18, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Oh, I can't WAIT to see what Sasuke has in mind!!!! The tension is unbelievably hot!!! I can't wait for more! EM
schedule February 18, 2007 at 12:00 AM
OMG!!! I have frickin' GOOSEBUMPS!!! I love this piece.

If I had dreams about Sasuke like that, I'd be so uber pissed if someone woke me up.

1:30 huh? I can't wait...please don't make me wait too long.

I'll rub your feet, give you a massage, anything...I promise! I'll even bake cookies! You like cookies, right? Who doesn't like cookies? They are much better than cliffies!!

Please...please...please...please. I'll be good...okey-dokey?
person Zrina
schedule February 18, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I would really love to tell you how much I am enjoying the story and how absolutely delicious the tension is getting. However, I am currently having to run to the bathroom to grab some tissue paper to stop all the nosebleeding that this last chapter has caused! Can't wait to see more!!
schedule February 18, 2007 at 12:00 AM
"With a snort, Naruto decided to go with the book because he didn't catch that jerking off in the locker room shower yesterday." im sure it wouldnt be as fun to watch a textbook jerk off in the shower, *sigh* but /Naruto/, the book will also not smexily seduce you (not that he really needs much seducing, more light coersion ^.~) and im sure you'd enjoy that a lot less *fic love, waits for updates patiently on the edge of the seat* ^.^
schedule February 13, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Oh Naruto, you (accidental) minx! that was dirty, but then again, why take a picture of your cock if you're not planning on sending it, that was /such/ the physical freudian slip... ^.^ looking forwards to seeing the Uchiha's mad master plan, part of me wants it to fizzle and die around him for being a smart ass, but then there would be less chance of teh smexins so i root for Sasuke :D
person barara
schedule February 12, 2007 at 12:00 AM
YAH! this chapter PLEASED ME LOTS! oh man.. If I was a guy I'd have the most massive boner ever XD
schedule February 12, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Sugoi!!!! That chapter... had me laughing and sighing imagining Sasuke...busily going at it... not once but twice... great way to show his POV... really nice... I would be impressed by your description too... lucky bastard! Now... update, ne? whenever you can please! Not a moment before.... ok? ^.^ Thanks for making my day nicer!