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by FoxyS30

schedule February 11, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Hehe - that was so good lol. When the bottle hit the keryboard I was like 'NO' and when Naruto walked in on Sasuke in the shower I was like 'OH F*** ME!' (sorry for the language, but that's what I said lolol. Really great chp. update when you can, ne?

Hina xXxx

p.s. it was hot too ;) (forgot to mention that)
person Allys
schedule February 11, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Ladies, that was.... that was... to echo your words

... So Fucking SEXY!

Holy fucking shit - he actually sent the picture and by accident too! Damn Straight - HELLZ YEAH!! So glad about that, poor Sasuke probably haemorrhaged in front of his computer screen, his only salvation being the indecision on his bodies part between which head the blood should go to.

The shower scene knocked my socks off and I can't wait to get inside Sasuke's head to see what's going on in there. And poor clueless Naruto, out of the frying pan into the fire.

I am Loving this!
person barara
schedule February 11, 2007 at 12:00 AM
*giggles* Lucky Naruto, seeing Sasuke all.. Yummy ^_^
I hope you post a new chapter soon! I cannot wait to see what Sasuke will do when Naruto gets comfy with his internet persona XD
schedule February 11, 2007 at 12:00 AM
ohhh... that was good and perverted all rolled into one!! congratulations!! me loved it!!! now... be good and update... ne?
That Sasuke is really naughty... and Naruto is so cute!! LOL... he reminds me of myself... I go all gaga for Yaoi... good yaoi! Nyah!! XD
person VRon8899
schedule February 11, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I can't wait till you update again!!! I'm loving this!!!
person Exane
schedule February 3, 2007 at 12:00 AM
LOL!! This is going to be really interesting XDD!! I can't wait to imagine how Sasuke's face would look like when he sees the picture XDDD!!
LOve the story so far, but can you make it to a SasuNaruSasu instead? Since Sasuke seems so seme-ish here, he should be the more dominant one .x.
Looking forward to the next chapter!
schedule February 3, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Lol, well I’m not really sure how this fic is going to progress, but I can say that this is a pretty damn funny piece of fiction you’ve cooked up. Throughout the entire time I was reading this I was smirking, and when I couldn’t suppress myself anymore, I was full out laughing. I admit that your first chapter was funny, but the second chapter from Sasuke’s point of view was hilarious. I look forward to your next chapter(s).

Oh, and I also wanted to say that I agree that the complete uke/complete seme thing is getting old. I do have to admit though that if a character doesn’t have some sort of dominating spirit within them, it’s hard to think of them as being an uke. However, because of the way you’ve decided to portray Sasuke and Naruto I think that reversal of roles between the two is very believable, and very sexy. I’m extremely interested to see how you will handle our two favorite boys in the upcoming chapters. My best wishes for you and your writing.
person darktoy
schedule February 3, 2007 at 12:00 AM
OH My FUcking GOD!!!!!!!!!! SAsuke you perverted genius!!!!!!!! You even made me wake up at the 3AM just to read this!!!!!!!!

Ehrm... I like this, it's funny and so... NARUTO-LIKE!!!!!!

UPDATE SOON!
person Kerrisa
schedule February 3, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I love it, so deliciously funny and entertaining!! *glomps the both of you* Arigatou for such a fun fic! =D I can't wait to read more!!
schedule February 3, 2007 at 12:00 AM
*giggles* loving it! Sasuke and Naruto are so in character, it's working out great so far. Looking forward to the next chapter, as always ^_^