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by FoxyS30

person barara
schedule February 3, 2007 at 12:00 AM
ooooohhh man.. I hope Naruto sends him that picture XD and I'd love to see Sasuke's reaction to xD!!!
person Andi-chan
schedule February 3, 2007 at 12:00 AM
OMGosh!!!!
I loved it! Keep going!!!

Sasuke's such a mean bastard... But we all love him...

...But Naruto loves him more!!!
lol

-Andi-chan
person Allys
schedule February 2, 2007 at 12:00 AM
OH DAMN!!! Please tell me he puts up a pic of his cock! PLEASE PLEASE!!! Even though that would probably get his ass kicked off the site. LOL, he'd probably get a butt load of offers too, hehehehe, the things you do to my brain, *sigh*
schedule February 2, 2007 at 12:00 AM
OMG Sasuke is so mean. but thats okay, he's good like that *fic love* will we get to see more? because clueless!naruto is /everybody's/ favorite flavor :p
schedule February 2, 2007 at 12:00 AM
looooooooooooooool you guys are ABSLUTELY BRILLIANT!!!!!!!! more more more more - it's just so... so... AWESOME, I mean I just read the 1st chp and I thought there has got to be more - Bleach doujinshi eh? hehe, I might look into that myself hehe. So give us more more and more!

^_^Best,
Hina xXxx
schedule February 2, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Will Naru post a pic of his??? Sauske is absolutely EVIL!!!!
schedule January 25, 2007 at 12:00 AM
This was interesting. I love AU Naruto fanfics and I like where you're going with this. I can't say much because it's just the introduction but I'm already attached to Naruto and I could even hear his voice when he asked Sai to borrow the book. Sakura's 'Valley Girl' response was funny too and Sharingan...guy's profile was hilarious.

There were a few grammatical errors but I never really call on those because I make them too.

Keep up the good work you two.
schedule January 25, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I love it! So far this is looking like a really enjoyable story. I usually like AU's anyways, but this one has the added twist of Naruto and Sasuke being Bleach yaoi fans, and you've kept them in character so far without making it feel like something I've read a million times. You've made them new and fresh, and I thank you for that. I can't wait for more! ^_^

IshixIchi FTW! XD
person Allys
schedule January 25, 2007 at 12:00 AM
LOL! Good one. Let's think - why does Naruto like the Ichigo/Ishida pairing? Hmmn... Ignorant, Loud, Strawberry blond Idiot savant with Quiet, Genius, Raven haired Bastard. O.o... Riiight. Love it. I also really like the forum idea, keep those chappies coming.
schedule January 25, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Great chapter! ^_^ Nyaaaa! Ichigo is SO NOT a loser! Meanie Sasuke. *pouts*