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for One Thing I Hate: COMPUTERS!

by FoxyS30

schedule January 25, 2007 at 12:00 AM
He had Bleach yaoi doujinshi to jerk off to tonight!

LOL. that's too funny. it's really good so far. i cant wait to read more!
person darktoy
schedule January 25, 2007 at 12:00 AM
OMFG!!!!!!!!! LMAO!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! I can't believe Naruto can be so bold.... and yet.... he is Naruto after all!!!!!! I love the start, and was that jelousy what I sense in Sasuke bumping into Sai? or Am I just being suspicious...? (suspicious my ass... HE WAS JELOUS!!!!!!)

Anyway, good writing, poor naruto's pillow....

UPDATE SOON!
schedule January 25, 2007 at 12:00 AM
hello....ummm.... I think your story plot is nice, but I think I'll stick around and see what you have instore for this pic and how it will progress.... I'm waiting for your next update....
person Exane
schedule January 25, 2007 at 12:00 AM
omg, this is gonna be some funny crack fic XDDD!! Looking forward to the cybersex, it's just so tempting!
Looking forward to more!^___^
schedule January 25, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Please tell me that this will continue...I'd love to see how this ends.
person tovah
schedule January 25, 2007 at 12:00 AM
This could be awesome! please continue!
schedule January 25, 2007 at 12:00 AM
That was very interesting. I liked the premise lol. Can't wait to read more. Update soon!
person Crimson-Tenshi
schedule January 25, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I really love the first chapter of your story, it has loads of potential and I am eager to see where you are going to take this story. I really hope to see more of this, and hope it's soon. Ja ne.