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for Good Boy Meets Bad Boy

by ShinobiKyouta

person Shayna
schedule November 28, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Hey, I totally love your story but I was wondering,
if you're ever going to mention what happened during
said "gangbang incident". Or why Naruto is so keen
to keep people away from Sakura.
person Dream Chan ^-^
schedule November 27, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Well this is my first time writing a 'review' so I apologize if it's not exactly what it should be but I enjoy your story so much I thought it was worth looking like an idiot. Where should I start? The characters! I love them you write them so well and I believe this is the only good fanfiction that takes Naruto characters so out of their natural element yet they adapt so fantastically! It gets you thinking, if Naruto took place in a setting more like the one in your story your story would probably be the anime! You've adapted them to their parts in the story so well allowing them to keep just about everything about themselves and not have it hinder the story in the least. I think the way you do the characters is my favorite thing, if the character is ever out of character it's only ever so slightly and it's well worth the small quirk seeing how amusing and gripping it makes reading it! The characters were amazing to start with and I think you've made me even more of a fan of a few characters than I already was, and that's saying a lot! Well before I go rambling off on my obsessions on with the review yeah? The story! I love it, the whole concept of rich boy Sasuke seems to be perfect for a guy like him and the whole gang leader Naruto just fits the character so well! I think it's a great idea the concept for your story and I think your amazing writing ability only adds to it all. You write so well! Never do I read a chapter where anything seems like filler, I can't bring myself to hurry through it I have to read it all and then reread it to take it all in completely making sure I didn't miss a thing, every detail seems to be so important and entertaining with a fantastic writer like yourself! And it's not just the big broad things like characters and the story that is so amazing, one of the smaller things I find so enjoyable is the titles of the chapters! So from the big things to all the small things it's flat out an amazing story you're writing and I'll eagerly await each update!
schedule November 26, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Oh shit. This is getting really really good.
person Akiru chan
schedule November 26, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Well I am finally caught up... I have been so far behind in reading your fic. I am such a procrastinator.

But now I am caught up and I have to say I am glad to finally have read everything so far. This is such a great fic and the current cliffie is killing me. XD

I hope you update soon.

-Akiru-
person Damp
schedule November 26, 2007 at 12:00 AM
OMG!! What's going to happen!

-Damp *The suspense is killing me!!*
person qwerty
schedule November 26, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Great chapter. Can't wait to see what happens next!
update!
person Puzzling
schedule November 26, 2007 at 12:00 AM
omg!!! I wanna know what's going to happen next!!! Knowing that orochimaru wanted to meet naruto.. i scary! I mean.. for all i know.. he probably just said business date coz he plans on doing something else to naruto too!! Like that time when naruto went to his office to drop off something!! So scary!! That slimy snake bastard! I hate his guts. EWW!!
person LadyWolf
schedule November 24, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I am so seriously starting to hate CLIFFIES!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
person Alleya
schedule November 24, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Write more and for the love of Kami keep me updated why you post a new chapter. This story is freakin' awesome and enteraining.
person Koji
schedule November 23, 2007 at 12:00 AM
YAY!!! A new chapter!

Soooooo excited about this! What's Neji gonna do *_*??

xxx