rate_review Reviews

Oro is so gross! I love it! Good job with his intro.

Love it!

hmmm...I like this story alot. Not too many people write Naruto as a badass. Keep up the good work. waiting for the next chapter. PA.

Fuck my hand is numb, anyway since you apologized so nicely I guess I'll review. Long over due! But I won't torment you about it, or bitch, much. I liked this chapter, hope that you update again soon, and don't worry you're not a failure as a novelist, you just get a little lost sometimes I'm sure, it happens to the best of us, or rather all of us. Hope you do continue with your story because the only thing that would really make you a failure as a novelist is to start writting this thing and then just fucking abandon it. But since you didn't and I know you won't then it's okay. I really like this story and where it's going so glad that you updated again.

- Snow

I love this story so much. And I love the little twist and turns you have in here. And SAI!!! Perfect. The best Sai I have ever read!!! Now I have to sit and wait patiently for your next update. The interaction between everyone is wonderful! I love it!

My god Ino and Sakura was having a psuedoincest relationship kinda. Heh man Kiba isa Horndog U should have made Shikamaru suggest Sai helpin' Kiba with his problem^^.

Anyway keep it up it's a great story need help with Ideas I'm all yours.(got alot of 'em)

good so good finally we are finding out naruro's secret's keep it coming im loving your story

OMFG... O.o I love it! Badass Naruto... lazy Gaara...pouting Neji...perverted Kiba...and Sasuke.... Please UPDATE!

lol - I loved the Gantz reference. Keep on writing, you rock!!!

Awesome story! I like the whole gang thing for some reason lol. But whatever, great story, plez try to update soon