rate_review Reviews

Excellent story! Would love to read more about the aftermath of the marriage and what they name the girls, but this is good as it stands. Great job!

This is an awsome story I hope you make a second one plaeeeese

best narukure ive ever read, seriously. go ahead and do a follow up id love to read it.

Very, very good. I liked the buildup.

It took me forever to get the time to find this fic again. Great job. Can't think of enough good things to say about this.

Very Nice!

OK I know this is late but you MUST DO UPDATES! This was an AWESOME story, a perfect oneshot but it can be continued and with your writing skills it would be awesome.

VEry nice. I don't review very often but, this was a very well thought out and well written story. Great job.

great story good plot, nice twist with the kids, you should write a sequel but i think that might be hard with the
conculsion.

wow. this was a really gret story. i felt the need to read a kurenai story and i found this one and i was not disappointed at all. really great lead in. then nice lemon in the middle/end. the epilogue was hilarious. loved it. i would really like to read more of this story. btw i also really like your other two stories although i am wondering if you are going to update anytime soon. not complaining but is the one with the summoning dead or are you just taking a break? same for this one i guess since it was a month ago that you wrote it. please continue these stories.