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that was funny! loved it!

*Giggles and wipes tears away*...Oh..that poor Sasuke, he has put in all this time trying to get his man and he's still fucking up! *Smiles*...here, lemme give him a pointer.

*Clears throat*...Sasuke, dear, boys like it nasty! Like hot and sweaty man sex that totally is not for our benifit and soooo for Naruto's. So, as a friend, this is what you need to do.

Find that nice spot were no one can really see you, but don't worry if you see bushes moving towards you giggling. That's nothing. Really.
Push your man roughly against the wall, and have your mouth's wicked way with his.
Start slowly removing the clothes...
Once nude...well...if you can figure out the rest you have more issues than I can help you with. *Fishes around hello kitty bag and produces the one thing that might save your night, a nicly semi used copy of Icha Icha I 'borrowed' from Kakashi*...For everyones sake..read this first, it helps. Really.



Zrina! I love this, it's such a nice light weight story to read inbetween SoD! Can't wait to see more!
JA NA,
SeveredWIngs

HAHAHA! I fucking love you for writing this fic! Oh man, fricken hilarious XD

O.o..... This is hilarious. I had to kidnap a fluffy pillow to keep from waking the whole house when I read chapter three. -Can't wait for the date-

Hehehe *Snicker snicker* LOL *Snort* roflmao ROFLMAO!!! *gasp* ROFLMAO!!! *Dies*

*snicker* oh, this is golden... i can't wait for the smut! i love the smut!! silly sasuke... i can't wait to read the next chapter. eeheeheehee!! please update soon!!~

The 3rd chapter was...hmmmm...

The first two started out okay...but the third just didn't really portray Sasuke's personalityb. I know you said Sasuke was acting OOC, but I don't think he would even try acting like that. It just didn't feel right.

Bright side: Everyone else's personalities and reactions to the situations were great.



Thanks for the update, and I look forward to the IC Sasuke. :) *thumbs up*

Ja!

This is hilarious. I love this.

Wow - that has to be the worst.. courtship(?) ever looooooooool, poor Sasuke, I loved the bit in the library where Naruto went 'I was just waiting for you to put your make up on' hehe, classic :D

can't wait for the next part ;)

Hina xXxx

omfg that was fucking hilarious. poor, clueless sasuke.. lmao, omg it was almost hard to read as sasuke went about blatantly embarrassing himself while trying to woo his dobe XD i kept wanting to cover my eyes and peek through my fingers at him lol (especially during the 'mimic naruto's actions' part hahaha) poor guy.. yeah, i'd be hoping it was all really worth it in the end too :p as for 'who gets to top' i don't mind too much either way, i like both too (i just tend to get excited about narusasu more since sasunaru is so much more prevalent) and here it's kinda hard to decide.. on the one hand, sasuke was turned on to begin with by what naruto had said on the phone, which suggests naruto should 'top', but sasuke is the one doing all this 'research' and making the effort to go after him (even if he's following advice for girls...) so maybe it should come down to who knows better what they're doing.. though in this situation just cuz sasuke may research it doesn't mean he'd know what he's doing lol.. so whatever you end up going with will be cool with me :p