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for Wrong Number

by Zrina

person Mikra
schedule February 2, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Oh God. I couldn't even read all of it. Had to skip a few sentences, I felt so mortified for Sasuke's sake. He's such an idiot.
Great work :)
person Mikra
schedule February 2, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Oh, and I would really like this to be NaruSasu 'cause after everything that happened in this fic, I don't really see Sasuke on top. And then there is the fact that I'm generally a NaruSasu-fan... XD
person animehead
schedule February 2, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I have never laughed so much when reading a fan fiction...and out loud like some sort of freakish nut! Hmm I think this is going to be a SasuNaru story, which I like. Hell, I like NaraSasu too. I don't care to be honest!

Now, I must say that you work fast. I thought I would have my next chapter posted before you had this one done (it's done, I'm just waiting on my beta). I felt like I had to put some smut in it after reading your stories...so I did! LOL.

Anyway, I can't wait to read the next chapter's for your stories. I have become addicted to your writing..

Now for the actual review: What I liked most about this chapter was how you allowed it to flow, like switching to different days and stuff. The fact that Sasuke went researching was GREAT, and having him attempt to lure in his blond was hilarious and brillant. Oh! and him copying Naruto, but not being as gross as him, and Naruto's amusement from the whole situation had laughing and grinning like an idiot. *sigh* I'm almost sorry that this story is coming to an end...not too many stores out there that make me laugh like this one.

Oh well...Great as usual!!! Can't wait for the next chapter.
person tovah
schedule February 2, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I swear this story gets better with every chapter. Please keep up the good work and update soon!
schedule February 2, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I love this story! Its so funny and sweet. LOL poor Sasuke reading dating advice for girls, hilarious! You are doing an amazing job. Keep up the good work:D
person Danya
schedule February 2, 2007 at 12:00 AM
*dies from laughing* That was great! I can't wait to see how the date goes.....Update soon!
person VRon8899
schedule February 2, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I actually feel really bad for Sasuke XD lol. nicely done I can't wait till u update!!
person dana
schedule February 2, 2007 at 12:00 AM
thanks about the sound of dreams and this was one funny chapter. i felt so sorry for poor sasuke going to that stupid website. don't he have any friends he could ask or something. since you will be making longer chapters will you include the date or just skip that for the smut. can't wait for the next update to find out.
person Total Truth
schedule February 2, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Hilarious, your stories are the best!
person Adi
schedule February 2, 2007 at 12:00 AM
i was actually laughing out loud at that fic, your humour is so awesome
members of my family kept giving me weird looks
guess they were wondering what was so funny about the essay i was meant be writing XD