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by Zrina

person Godsx
schedule February 2, 2007 at 12:00 AM
In this case meow wishes their first time will be NaruSasu, cos even if unknowingly but naruto was the one to do a first step, so he should get a reward for this - being seme. Also sasuke did enjoyed thinking about naruto's size - and was concerned about it - so don't let his concernes be invane and let him expirience it fully.
person rAiNwAtEr
schedule February 2, 2007 at 12:00 AM
OMG, Updates! Not one update, but two! Things are definitely heating up, but I have to say I feel really bad for Sasuke right now. I wish you the best and hope you update doon.

~~~rAiNwAtEr~~~

justice02908@yahoo.com
schedule February 2, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Fucking brilliant.

I am so eloquent...

- DeeDubbya
schedule February 2, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Ahh, this latest chapter was the best! ^_^ I had so much fun reading it, but I had to leave the house so I saved the page and took my laptop with me, which was probably a mistake XD I ended up laughing a lot and then shouting "MR HAPPY!!" causing my mom to bitch at me, lol. Loved it to death, you win the internets, Sasuke and Naruto plushies with strategically placed magnets, and tons of cookies XD can't wait for the last chapter!!
person Anon
schedule February 2, 2007 at 12:00 AM
wow, lol, funny. I want naruto to be uke!!!!!
person Lila
schedule February 2, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Oh my God...i have never had to stop and start reading a fic so much...I was so worried when Sasuke was mimicing Naruto...I was so scared i had to actually look away and pray that he didn't do that boxer move Naruto did. All in all you have my total interest and i don't mind that u started another fic sometimes people need a change in pace before they continue a certain fic. So please continue this i can't even imagine what's gonna happen on he date. (Waits with bated breath) XD
person Pic's Pixie
schedule February 2, 2007 at 12:00 AM
hahaha oh thats so awesome, luv the idea and can't wait to read more, i'm unsure which guy i want ontop....hmmmm maybe they could take turns hehe, but i kinda feel like sasuke should be top, he's sacrificed too much of his masculinity already, time to get some of that back lmao please hurry with the next chappie :P
schedule February 2, 2007 at 12:00 AM
This was hilarious!!! Poor, poor Sasuke!!! I am in tears thinking of his plight!!! ROFL!!! Please, have pity on us your readers!!!! I almost peed on my pants... with that last gift! T>T update soon!!
person Xenobia
schedule February 2, 2007 at 12:00 AM
*snicker* Could he possibly be any more clueless? Actually, they are both kinda clueless. The next chapter has got to be hilarious!!!
person silveryami
schedule February 2, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Ack! Thats so embarassing for Sasuke! If I was him, I would have quit a hundred times! Grr... Naruto is being so mean! But please PLEASE make it NaruSasu!!! There is so SO much SasuNaru, and not enough really good NaruSasu, so please? It would make me very happy!